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Chocolate Cosmos
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04-04-2011, 12:22 AM
Just finished this and I would like some feedback. :3
Just a close-up...
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Amaitae
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04-04-2011, 04:54 AM
Very nice pose. That's the first thing i'm drawn to. Good anatomy as well. Did you use a reference? It's really really good. Good value as well. I do think that the edges could be cleaned up a little, and I'm not totally sure what she is holding up.... But overall, it's pretty good. Good composition :)
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Chocolate Cosmos
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04-04-2011, 05:11 AM
Thank you for the critique. <3
I was having some trouble in areas... (The messy spots) and it kind of looked funny cleaned up.
She's supposed to be holding a tarot card. I have a screen shot of a close up but I'm on my phone right now...
And I did use a reference from posemaniacs.com :3
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Amaitae
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04-04-2011, 05:50 AM
omg, love that site :D It helps so much. I only wish they had a few more poses, rather than just a few with many different angles
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04-04-2011, 09:50 PM
I know what you mean... But I guess it takes a really long time to get the images made...
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WinglessFairy
Teh Awesome
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06-20-2011, 11:34 PM
good grief.
That's effing amazing!
TEACH ME YOUR MAGICS O_O
yes, I can't critique that at all...beautiful work =3
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Lucadia
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06-24-2011, 07:07 PM
This is a really amazing piece... Wow o_o. The edges are a little rough but other then that this piece of art is amazing!
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Cuddlymoon
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09-08-2011, 08:32 PM
WOW!!1
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Pa-chinko
Ninja
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09-11-2011, 08:25 AM
Its gorgeous, love it.
Only complaint I have would be the lips are a little big but beautiful otherwise.
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Maroon Surreal
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10-13-2011, 03:35 PM
WOW.
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Akoura
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10-26-2011, 10:17 AM
Oh, this is quite nice. Though, I think that you should add another shade of lighting to bring out the shape of the body and points such as where the leg over laps the other leg, to define the shape as the colours are similar and merge together. Maybe some added shades/highlights to the face as well to show the curves of her features. I love the eyes though.
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