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Old 04-04-2011, 12:22 AM

Just finished this and I would like some feedback. :3



Just a close-up...

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Old 04-04-2011, 04:54 AM

Very nice pose. That's the first thing i'm drawn to. Good anatomy as well. Did you use a reference? It's really really good. Good value as well. I do think that the edges could be cleaned up a little, and I'm not totally sure what she is holding up.... But overall, it's pretty good. Good composition :)

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Old 04-04-2011, 05:11 AM

Thank you for the critique. <3
I was having some trouble in areas... (The messy spots) and it kind of looked funny cleaned up.
She's supposed to be holding a tarot card. I have a screen shot of a close up but I'm on my phone right now...

And I did use a reference from posemaniacs.com :3

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Old 04-04-2011, 05:50 AM

omg, love that site :D It helps so much. I only wish they had a few more poses, rather than just a few with many different angles

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Old 04-04-2011, 09:50 PM

I know what you mean... But I guess it takes a really long time to get the images made...

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Old 06-20-2011, 11:34 PM

good grief.
That's effing amazing!
TEACH ME YOUR MAGICS O_O

yes, I can't critique that at all...beautiful work =3

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Old 06-24-2011, 07:07 PM

This is a really amazing piece... Wow o_o. The edges are a little rough but other then that this piece of art is amazing!

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Old 09-08-2011, 08:32 PM

WOW!!1

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Old 09-11-2011, 08:25 AM

Its gorgeous, love it.
Only complaint I have would be the lips are a little big but beautiful otherwise.

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Old 10-13-2011, 03:35 PM

WOW.

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Old 10-26-2011, 10:17 AM

Oh, this is quite nice. Though, I think that you should add another shade of lighting to bring out the shape of the body and points such as where the leg over laps the other leg, to define the shape as the colours are similar and merge together. Maybe some added shades/highlights to the face as well to show the curves of her features. I love the eyes though.

 


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