
10-30-2011, 02:40 PM
Okay, so I was going to start a new story, since it's been forever since I've written anything. I was trying to think of something original, because I'm usually so bland when it comes to plots for me. Then as I finished one of the books I've been reading, I got an idea. I could write about something from the villian's point of veiw. So, I started cracking. It's about a witch named Ilia. During the story, she doesn't give her last name, so I decided not to give her one. If the need arises, I'll make a quickie, but for now, no. Um... The main story is about her going out on a killing spree, and plotting to do something real big (giant cliche there, but ah well) and the good guys (but in her perspective, the bad guys) trying to stop her. I'm not quite sure who they good guys'll be yet, though. Again, I just sort of thought this up, so... here. Just read it. Tell me if it's a good start. Or don't. You know.
The room was clouded and musky. There were people every which way, and not one of them him. My eyes moved back and forth, looking over people's heads. Then I spoted it. A green haired boy was walking towards me - fast. I smiled. That was a good one.
My feet turned me around, and they led me to a balchony. I turned around, and saw the boy staring at me angrily. A high, eerie giggle formed from my lips, and a surge of joy bounced inside me like and excited puppy.
The wind of the balchony lapped at me, my snow white hair hitting the edges of my dainty features. I could almost feel my bright aqua eyes glowing in the darkness. I smiled. He was tranced.
I waved my hand, and he came out of it, but too slowly. He knew too much about me. I could see it in his face as his heart started to beat faster and faster, and his blood boiling beneath his skin.
"Goodbye, green haired man."
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