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Old 12-22-2011, 06:40 AM

I will post finished works here for critique! Please give me some constructive criticism. I'm working on improving my artwork so that I can pursue it seriously. ^^

The first piece I am posting is:

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Old 12-27-2011, 07:49 PM

That actually looks pretty good[:
I think it might help if you add her jaw line though, it looks like her neck is a part of her face xD.
I also feel like the eye is misplaced or something, but I'm not good at people so I shouldn't really be talking though. Keep drawing! I'd love to see more[:.

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Old 04-10-2012, 02:12 AM

I agree, her eye should be a bit further up on the face and closer. Make the chin a bit more prominent and SHADE the skin...maybe with a reddish orange hue.

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Old 04-24-2012, 09:49 PM

Interesting o3o I like the eyes

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Old 04-25-2012, 04:44 AM

that good i suck at drawing side face

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Old 04-28-2012, 08:24 AM

o-o
I has posts here...I completely forgot about this thread.

Erinmc:
Hmm...yeah I tried experimenting with that a little...it was a little frustrating to make it look right.

Cuddlymoon:
I can see the eye is off, I'll keep that in mind when I try to draw something like this again. And I
haven't done a lot of digital drawing so that's why there isn't shading. ^^; I have to get better at it :d

kittynekohime:
Thank you! :3

jabble:
Thanks...and yeah, this took references, erasing, and redrawing. ^^;

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Old 04-28-2012, 07:11 PM

your welcome ^^

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Old 05-04-2012, 06:54 AM

Good job!

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Old 06-17-2012, 05:10 PM

The neck looks a little funny but honestly the eyes look fine to me. Lots of people have lots of different heights and different properties about their facial features.

 


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