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Old 04-09-2012, 02:46 PM

I need critiques on how to improve anatomy and coloring. This is a Gijinka for Cotton Candy for a contest on DeviantArt.



Also I'd love it if someone could red-line for me.

Thanks!

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Old 05-09-2012, 04:05 AM

Oh my god, that is absolutely adorable. Her hair looks like cotton candy :3

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Old 05-09-2012, 04:22 AM

Cuddly~ :O You're on Mene too? <3

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Old 06-13-2012, 06:24 AM

great i love the color<3

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Old 06-14-2012, 02:25 AM

Here, I red-lined your drawing.

Click here!

It was a bit hard to red-line since, well, it's a chibi and also it's drawn in a stylistic manner where everything is supposed to be distorted, or miniature. I also didn't know if you wanted just for the body/position or face. Anime is a bit hard for me to critique.

So I made a character sheet, and I know what I drew doesn't line up, but I wanted to show you how the anatomy is built in an easy way.

The joint is like a ball, (like a ball-joint doll) and when an arm, or a leg is coming foward, it overlaps the joint. In your drawing, it was a bit hard to see that, making the elbows a bit wonky looking. I drew to show you how the foot would look hanging like on the girl.

The hands are difficult because, since they're crossed, it shows a lot of fingers. I'd suggest, just drawing a gesture of it, so it shows the gist of the movement of the hands, but not drawing all 10 fingers.

I hope this helps. I can always help red line anything else.

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Old 06-17-2012, 01:00 AM

I suck at drawing so I can't do much for you but she's so cute I can hardly stand it!
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