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Old 04-26-2016, 03:43 AM

Not quite a cliffhanger because a drama point is more about a character's reaction to a certain event than about whether or not they're going to survive or whatever. It's more like a commercial break in a soap opera, like they'll be like:
"THE BABY IS YOURS ROGELIO!"
"IT CAN'T BE, I'M STERILE"
"....will be back after the break"
Except not quite /that/ dramatic.

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#402
Old 04-26-2016, 12:57 PM

i think the above is actually a dramatic cliffhanger. xD but get rid of the commercial break and have it turn into an all out argument and that's just a drama point explosion. lol

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Old 04-26-2016, 02:48 PM

That... is cliff hanger to me.
Just maybe, the cliff hanger commercial break is much shorter than waiting for the author to write out the next book. lol.

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#404
Old 04-27-2016, 12:34 AM

xD or the next chapter perhaps?

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#405
Old 04-27-2016, 02:10 AM

Ok yeah that was a bad example.

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#406
Old 04-27-2016, 02:13 AM

hehe. its okay bearzy. i thought it was great.

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#407
Old 04-27-2016, 03:21 AM

Remind me not to write while tired, because that shit happens

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#408
Old 04-27-2016, 03:12 PM

But those 'shit' are fun to make. XD

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Old 04-28-2016, 12:09 AM

they really are. and who knows what will spawn out of tired talk . xD

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Old 04-28-2016, 02:30 PM

It will become 'shit' if there is some very ultra ultimate sensitive people that always misunderstand the joke around.

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#411
Old 04-28-2016, 02:37 PM

Ithat is some super sensitivity if it is ultra ultamate. wow. jokes do tend to get misunderstood by someone though. and just requitres a little bit of communication to straighten things out. ^^

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#412
Old 04-29-2016, 08:20 AM

Guys. Nobody panic but I just realised that a weekend of solid writing will finish my novel.
Well, my first draft. BUT STILL.

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Old 04-29-2016, 04:19 PM

THE sweet sound of FINISH LINE!
You have achieve something I would love to!

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Old 04-29-2016, 06:47 PM

Bearzy wow!! That's so satisfying. I hope one day to join you in the sweet success of finishing a first draft of an entire novel ;-;

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#415
Old 04-29-2016, 09:07 PM

Yours is like 3x longer than mine xuvie! You're still doing better than me!

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#416
Old 04-30-2016, 05:08 AM

It is not about quantity, it is about the finish linee~~~~
*dramatic drumrollll*

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#417
Old 04-30-2016, 05:27 AM

yay for bearzy! finishing a first draft :3 wooohooo!!!

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Old 04-30-2016, 07:06 AM

I may need 2 more NaNo round to finish my first draft... it seems endless...

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#419
Old 04-30-2016, 11:45 PM

You can do it Xuvvie! i believe in you :D

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#420
Old 04-30-2016, 11:55 PM

I may start on writing my story soon.
I may mix it in with a different story.
Though I am going to make several chapters about the characters in their POV
since I don't want 1 character to be the main character.

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#421
Old 05-01-2016, 12:08 AM

ooo you know what might be fun. something like Hoodwinked. where it tells the same story from the different POVs up to a certain point, and than its the narrator who takes over for the conclusion bit of the story.

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#422
Old 05-01-2016, 03:22 AM

OOooh.

OH MAN GUYS
I DID THE THING.
I FINISHED MY DRAFT

OH MAN

now what?

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#423
Old 05-01-2016, 10:12 AM

Bearzyzy, spend some time to indulge in that fulfillness of your draft.
Before starting the editing stage. XD lol.

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#424
Old 05-01-2016, 11:35 AM

I am going to take a break, I think, from the story as a whole before doing a second draft.

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#425
Old 05-01-2016, 04:45 PM

I went to do some art shopping again. lol.
I am running out of things to buy. x.x

 


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