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04-26-2016, 03:43 AM
Not quite a cliffhanger because a drama point is more about a character's reaction to a certain event than about whether or not they're going to survive or whatever. It's more like a commercial break in a soap opera, like they'll be like:
"THE BABY IS YOURS ROGELIO!"
"IT CAN'T BE, I'M STERILE"
"....will be back after the break"
Except not quite /that/ dramatic.
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04-26-2016, 12:57 PM
i think the above is actually a dramatic cliffhanger. xD but get rid of the commercial break and have it turn into an all out argument and that's just a drama point explosion. lol
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04-26-2016, 02:48 PM
That... is cliff hanger to me.
Just maybe, the cliff hanger commercial break is much shorter than waiting for the author to write out the next book. lol.
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04-27-2016, 12:34 AM
xD or the next chapter perhaps?
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04-27-2016, 02:10 AM
Ok yeah that was a bad example.
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04-27-2016, 02:13 AM
hehe. its okay bearzy. i thought it was great.
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04-27-2016, 03:21 AM
Remind me not to write while tired, because that shit happens
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04-27-2016, 03:12 PM
But those 'shit' are fun to make. XD
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04-28-2016, 12:09 AM
they really are. and who knows what will spawn out of tired talk . xD
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04-28-2016, 02:30 PM
It will become 'shit' if there is some very ultra ultimate sensitive people that always misunderstand the joke around.
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04-28-2016, 02:37 PM
Ithat is some super sensitivity if it is ultra ultamate. wow. jokes do tend to get misunderstood by someone though. and just requitres a little bit of communication to straighten things out. ^^
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04-29-2016, 08:20 AM
Guys. Nobody panic but I just realised that a weekend of solid writing will finish my novel.
Well, my first draft. BUT STILL.
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04-29-2016, 04:19 PM
THE sweet sound of FINISH LINE!
You have achieve something I would love to!
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04-29-2016, 06:47 PM
Bearzy wow!! That's so satisfying. I hope one day to join you in the sweet success of finishing a first draft of an entire novel ;-;
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04-29-2016, 09:07 PM
Yours is like 3x longer than mine xuvie! You're still doing better than me!
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04-30-2016, 05:08 AM
It is not about quantity, it is about the finish linee~~~~
*dramatic drumrollll*
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04-30-2016, 05:27 AM
yay for bearzy! finishing a first draft :3 wooohooo!!!
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04-30-2016, 07:06 AM
I may need 2 more NaNo round to finish my first draft... it seems endless...
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04-30-2016, 11:45 PM
You can do it Xuvvie! i believe in you :D
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04-30-2016, 11:55 PM
I may start on writing my story soon.
I may mix it in with a different story.
Though I am going to make several chapters about the characters in their POV
since I don't want 1 character to be the main character.
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05-01-2016, 12:08 AM
ooo you know what might be fun. something like Hoodwinked. where it tells the same story from the different POVs up to a certain point, and than its the narrator who takes over for the conclusion bit of the story.
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05-01-2016, 03:22 AM
OOooh.
OH MAN GUYS
I DID THE THING.
I FINISHED MY DRAFT
OH MAN
now what?
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05-01-2016, 10:12 AM
Bearzyzy, spend some time to indulge in that fulfillness of your draft.
Before starting the editing stage. XD lol.
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05-01-2016, 11:35 AM
I am going to take a break, I think, from the story as a whole before doing a second draft.
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05-01-2016, 04:45 PM
I went to do some art shopping again. lol.
I am running out of things to buy. x.x
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