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06-12-2017, 07:49 PM
I would say... Don't change a thing! It's super cute as is. I love the primary color effect!
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Ignis
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06-12-2017, 07:59 PM
I think it's perfect. The only thing that bothers me a little little bit is the waterfall in the back. I don't know where it's coming from exactly, so it doesn't really make sense.
BUT nothing has to make sense. It's good. Don't change it.
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Kirin Rosenbaum
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06-13-2017, 01:22 AM
Don't change a thing. I rather like it.
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Shadami
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06-16-2017, 01:01 AM
Was there any purple swimsuits is my only thing. otherwise its awesome :D
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Bearzy
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06-16-2017, 08:10 AM
I think you should maybe have a more homely and less outdoorsy background?
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Kirin Rosenbaum
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06-16-2017, 10:03 AM
Don't change a thing. Your avatar is simply stunning and you use that hair well.
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Linnea
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06-18-2017, 01:55 AM
i second Shadami's comment about a purple swimsuit, as it would be like a version of the purple dress. otherwise, leave it!
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Bearzy
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06-18-2017, 04:05 AM
I don't really know what you're going for with the moustache and eyebrows but don't change a thing, you look smashing.
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Kirin Rosenbaum
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06-18-2017, 10:39 AM
Don't change a thing. It's amazing.
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Kat Dakuu
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09-29-2017, 07:26 PM
Don't change. The only thing it could possibly need is some blue at the feet, but nothing that would perfectly fit as a small accent exists.
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Bearzy
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09-29-2017, 11:30 PM
I know you can't do anything about the sash and skirt clipping so don't change a thing
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Kirin Rosenbaum
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09-30-2017, 11:01 AM
Don't change a thing. She's amazing.
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10-08-2017, 06:02 AM
I recommend a different belt. The current one looks off with the rest of your elegant, formal outfit.
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Bearzy
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10-08-2017, 11:43 AM
Don't change a thing, you look so regal and elegant, and just dang well themed.
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Kirin Rosenbaum
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10-08-2017, 03:09 PM
Don't change a thing. It's a great cosplay.
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10-08-2017, 11:49 PM
Ayy. You look great! I like this belt a lot better. I can't think of any more changes, unless you wanna spruce up the background a bit.
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Kat Dakuu
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10-17-2017, 07:16 PM
Don't change a thing. Your face and the background look amazing!
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Kirin Rosenbaum
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10-17-2017, 08:58 PM
Two things; one this needs some sort of floor. Two I don't get the cloud background. Your avatar, to me, looks more like it should be in a jungle/forest setting.
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Dystopia
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10-21-2017, 04:48 AM
I would add some navy accessories. atm your mask is standing out a lil bit.
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Bearzy
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10-21-2017, 12:45 PM
I wouldn't change a thing. I wish the glow showed more around your head but as it is I love it. There aren't those jewelled foot things in silver are there? those would look great
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Kirin Rosenbaum
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10-21-2017, 01:02 PM
Don't change a thing. It tells a story to me.
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Linnea
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10-26-2017, 04:39 AM
i wouldn't say you need to lose an item, but maybe something dangling from the ceiling would make the look more complete. it doens't need much, it's very nice
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11-20-2017, 09:03 AM
oh my god... I wouldn't change anything... Except maybe I wish I could unsee this avatar. Good concept, good execution, but I am scarred.
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Kirin Rosenbaum
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11-20-2017, 10:26 PM
Don't change a thing. It's awesome and amazing.
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11-21-2017, 02:27 AM
Perhaps you could add a suitcase or some other traveling bag to go along with the train scene?
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