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Old 11-21-2007, 09:28 PM

I see a couple things wrong that I forgot to fix but I am in a rush.. =[

In the hills of Empayat, there was a Hero named Elvak. He wanted to become a God. Why? Because he wanted to help the people of Earth and punish the ones who cause madness. He always tried making peace and saving the citizens of Empayat. But, before he becomes a God, he must go on a quest to kill the one whom seeks Death in all, Deathmore the Fourth. His name rings the bell to death doesn't it? He is Elvak's most evil rival and they will fight... You will hear the story of how Elvak defeats Deathmore the Fourth! If Elvak wins the fight, the string of trapped souls in Deathmore the Fourth's layer shall be released and he will have rescued more than one thousand souls! Now the tale of the quest for Elvak to become a God shall begin...

One day he awoke from his shimmering and cold bed, he awoke knowing his start of the Journey to become a God would be a difficult task because of the things he must go through to defeat the almighty Deathmore the Fourth, although it would be in 2 days for him to start his journey. He first went straight to watering up his self and then he ate a lot of meat and healthy drinks to power up. He had then went to the Blacksmith and asked if he may Smith him up some really strong armor. The Blacksmith said yes and so Elvak paid him 1,500 pieces of gold.

The rest of the day, he spent working out and saving a couple lives here and there. He was also rewarded with 15,000 pieces of gold and a certificate of being the best hero for capturing a man who stole more than 100,000 pieces of Gold even though he already had more than a hundred certificates showing him being a marvelous hero. The one whom stole the gold was named Barktav, he is known for stealing more than 50,000 pieces of gold and then again stealing the rest of the 50,000 gold, so the Criminal was hung for the madness theft, the only problem is that he had a couple friends to help him steal the 100,000 pieces of gold and they may never know who the partners were. The next few hours he had fell to sleep as the moon rose above the clouds. He dreamed on about fighting the foul beast, Deathmore the Fourth, he dreamed of taking the own monster's sword and killing Deathmore the Fourth with his own sword known as the Ancient Katana with a Special power that can take a person's soul at death.

The next day he went back to the Blacksmith to check up on the steel armor, and it looked absolutely shining and powerful. He then went around a couple weaponry sellers and bought a few weapons he might need like a mace or even a couple bow and arrows. He tried going around finding the best of the best arrows. He had nothing to do that day but train and train on heavy stones. Elvak had enough spare time to help the Blacksmith with creating his own weapons and armor that he will use to fight in his journey. As the sun goes down and the Moon rises, Elvak's armor is being prepared to be fit in for the morning, he then falls asleep and he dreams of the mighty Deathmore the Fourth defeating him and grabbing his soul right out of his Dead body, he keeps thinking on and on about hot difficult his journey might be, but then his dream changes and he suddenly sees fire.. He also feels the furious burn and wakes up to see a real fire around his bed, it was a candle that had fell off his furniture! He rushed out the house, grabbed water from his well and puts out the fire as fast as he can, he then stays awake and waits as the night goes by trying to fix his house around a little.

Then as the sun rises once again below the Clouds, he gets off his bed and goes to have a morning breakfast as meat and some milk as always to start out his day, but no cleaning up himself for that day, he wishes to smell like a beast and tough before starting his journey. He jogs over to the Blacksmith to get some exercise and sees that his suit of armor and weapon is finished, and yes.. It is finished and looking more shiny than he saw it the day before. Hoping that he fights Deathmore the Fourth in the sun to blind Deathmore. He also has the best of the best flammable arrows to surely have Deathmore the Fourth going on fire. Elvak will also put a certain gel over the arrows that don’t let the fire rub off anything that is stuck with the gel to make sure Deathmore the Fourth tire down. The only thing that passed his head each second was how hard it might be to fight Deathmore the Fourth, harshly because he can steal a soul of a dead man or women.

He then takes his shiny new strong armor and puts it on himself to look more strong and muscular; they even have the inside of the armor made as cloth so it wouldn't hurt Elvak too much. Elvak hadn't even asked for the cloth inside so he felt generous enough to tip the Blacksmith with 1,000 pieces of gold, and so the Blacksmith lived a wealthy happy life. Now Elvak trains and trains awhile to get ready for his quest to the Death Mountains, where Deathmore the Fourth’s layer is hidden around. Now Elvak leaves his city and buys a sailing Ship for 10,000 pieces of gold and sails away to the Island of Death. He had brought a fishing rod with him so he can catch fish and a boiler so he can cook the food. Then he falls asleep for about 2 hours and suddenly. He woke up to a monstrous monster that the swam around his boat for a while and spit out water onto the boat as the boat was flooding Elvak tried dumping it out and so he did!

He yelled out at the foul beast “Look here, I will destroy you for what you have done to my ship! You will regret this in a painful death!” so he takes out his arrows of fire and his magical bow and flares it at the swimming beast and keeps flaring the arrows at the monster but it swam straight into the waters and the arrows heads of the arrows weren’t effecting it while the fire wore off in the water. He knew it would be a tough fight but also knew he would win the fight. So he aimed another 10 arrows straight for the eyes and the mouth and doesn’t miss any of the shots. As 5 shots go into the eye and 5 into the mouth. Yes, it has only 1 eye. So the monster starts screeching aloud and Elvak becoming def by the monsters yell of horribly pain, and so the monster screeches on and on while it swims vastly away from the sailing ship. Elvak knew he can destroy anything in its path and he proves it with the journey he is following along by.

He finally reaches a Island close to the Death mountains and so he leaves his ship along the sandy beach and takes all he needs with him like his armor, fish to eat, and his weaponry. He starts walking hoping to soon find the Death mountains and instead of finding the mountains, he finds a army of Skeleton Zombies! He thinks in his head it will be a easy fight but then blinks again and sees even more of the Skeleton Zombies! There are different groups of the Zombies, the Royal group which is owned by the King Skeleton Zombies which ride the skeleton horses and others which are Minions of the king. Some with bows, swords, and even spears. The first thing he takes out is his bow and fire arrows, puts gel all over his flaming arrow tips, lights the arrows up and start aiming towards the zombies flinging the arrows as if it were raining fire. One arrows caught onto a skeleton horse and the horse went running around leaving fire on most of the armies of the Skeleton Zombies so he had already took out more than half of the army Skeletons and takes out his sword then rushes and kills the rest. The king was a pathetic wimp and died fast. Elvak then took the crown and danced around the Skeleton Zombie for a little. Although he did not know that... I’m not going to tell you.

So he finally reaches the shore on the other side of the island and finds a volcano with lava and sees 2 dragons fighting.. The name of the red dragon was Rubiest, and the name of the red dragon was Saphiro. They fought out of anger and Rubiest was evil, but Saphiro always helped the good and was protecting them from Rubiest, so Saphiro was sick of his brother Rubiest always killing the innocent because of anger and so Saphiro finally took a stand but Rubiest was stronger! So elvak once again took out his bow and arrows quickly and launched them at Rubiest as fast as he can but that wouldn’t harm Rubiest enough! Then Rubiest tried to attack Elvak but Saphiro came and swoop him up as quickly as possible and the fly around Rubiest trying to trick him into hitting objects and so they did. Saphiro said “Young one, what are you doing around these death valleys?” and so Elvak replies “I seek the one known as Deathmore the Fourth!” Saphiro gasped and yelled “You can’t defeat him! He is too powerful and will destroy you!”. Elvak just rolled his eyes and they kept on trying to slay Rubiest.. Finally Elvak gets upset thinking Saphiro is basically saying Elvak is a weakling. So Elvak takes out his 2 handed sword and slices Rubiest across the neck slaying the Dragon with in a second.. “How is that for a weakling?” asks Elvak.

“That might be a mistake you will wish to regret. That is Deathmore the Fourth’s minion and Deathmore gets his revenge how ever he wishes for it” says Saphiro.. “Just take me to the Death Mountains so I can destroy the one you think is mortal.” demands elvak. “I am not saying he is mortal, I do have something you may need to weaken him but he will still be powerful” Saphiro then hands over the Amulet of Life. “This will only weaken the ability for him to use his spells” says Saphiro. “Well young one, your journey is about to be over as soon as we reach the Death Mountains, either you destroy Deathmore or he destroys you” says Saphiro. “Well I am willing to risk my life to help those of the innocent and so I will risk it!” yells Elvak. So they reach the Death Mountains without any talking and just drops Elvak off there.. Elvak then finds Deathmore the Fourth’s dungeon and enters it, Deathmore then sneaks behind him with his evil fingers and whispers “Hello little one, what may you be doing in my Dungeon?” “I have come to destroy you!”. Deathmore then floats in the air and laughs for 5 seconds. “You will and can not slay me little one! It will take the world to slay me and even that wont happen! Hahahaha!” yells Deathmore the Fourth.. Then he whispers a spell to himself “Come bonies bonies and kill this little one for he shall die in 1 minutes”. Then the Skeleton Zombies come and try to kill Elvak and Elvak just keeps jumping around with his sword dodging arrows and killing as much as he could and so he does while Deathmore leaves to do something else.. He then destroys them all this time for sure and so finds Deathmore again and shoots out 200 arrows at the monster in less than 10 seconds... All flaming and with gel so the fire stuck on Deathmore. Elvak then attaches the Amulet to one arrow and fires the arrow to Deathmore’s heart and makes Deathmore faint. Then comes Saphiro and breathes out fire to Deathmore as Deathmore got back up and they both lead a fight on for about 1 hour until Saphiro tires out and Elvak takes out his 2 hand sword and starts crushing Deathmore’s bones into pieces and Deathmore tries casting a spell but Saphiro blocked the spells with his own.

Deathmore was then weakened and flown away but not yet fully defeated. Deathmore is to come in another 5,000 years and to haunt the Death Mountains and kill any one who enters it til this day. So that is the story of how Elvak destroys Deathmore... For now...


Was for a school project and I got a A+ 100%! xD
And my friend did the drawings but I didn't get to scan them... :/

 


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