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Old 11-20-2007, 07:50 PM

Hey.

My anniversary with my boyfriend is coming up in just udner a week, and I'm drawing this for him.

I REally want some (COnstructive!!!!!!) Criticism please!

Please don't be like the asses on Gaia and just tell me to buy and anatomy book...




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Old 11-20-2007, 08:22 PM

The wrist is abit small

the palm of the hand needs to be wider
The thumb looks like its coming off the wrist instead of the hand.
Maybe make the fingers alittle longer?

Also she is looking at his eyebrows

other than that it looks great! XD the facial structure looks good to me

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Old 11-20-2007, 08:41 PM

yes, I agree. I can only find a little mistakes on the arm and hand, but other than that it's looking good!

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Old 11-20-2007, 09:50 PM

cool I can't wait to see it done. Sorry I am not good with critiques.

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Old 11-21-2007, 12:07 AM

The hand looks kinda weird, so you should try making it bigger and smaller on the fingers, I think, something like that xD

And, everything else is k.

I wanna see it when its done * 3*

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Old 11-21-2007, 10:29 PM

Everything is fantastic !

just work on the hand :wink:

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Old 11-22-2007, 12:00 AM

Both of their eyes are positioned on the bridges of their noses.
Her ear needs to be further back. Ears attach to one's head just behind the jaw.

 


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