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Old 11-23-2007, 07:34 PM

Ok this is a pic Im currently working on ^^ I got inspired with the RPG of a friend of mine <3

She's suposed to be one of I think four off-springs of gods, mine takes care of the Islands and Seas ^^ so I thought to make her "fishy" lol

She needs a lot of work but alas I am out of practice and of time.

So tell me what you think ^^

Here is my WIP:

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Old 11-23-2007, 10:25 PM

The area I think needs work would be her hands, both the anatomy and placement of them.
Maybe look for a reference, get someone to redline them for you, or even just look at your own hands while drawing (that's what I do XD).

Other than I think that's a very nice start and I look forward to seeing the finished product. :3

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Old 11-24-2007, 12:10 AM

cool she looks sexy

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Old 11-24-2007, 05:47 AM

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The area I think needs work would be her hands, both the anatomy and placement of them.
Maybe look for a reference, get someone to redline them for you, or even just look at your own hands while drawing (that's what I do XD).

Other than I think that's a very nice start and I look forward to seeing the finished product. :3
Redline... like outline some anatomical shtuff?
I've never heard of that before.

You're body looks quite graceful and lovely <3
Honestly I think the face makes it look goofy. But take that with a huge grain of salt because I don't like anime. ^^

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Old 11-24-2007, 07:14 AM

Yes, tracing over the art with red to clearly show suggested changes.

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Old 11-24-2007, 07:44 AM

Well I'd love to help with the hands if you want. You're lines are wonderful I think the hands could really make this pic pop.

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Old 11-26-2007, 05:26 PM

I agree with the hands thing I usually draw them better. I guess I focused too much on making her fishy ^^. And I guess the eyes make her look a little goofy. Im working on a new style but I wanst sure to post it here O.o maybe when I have more time. I definately want to finish the pic. But I suck at photoshop so dont expect it to be coloured lol. I posted another piccy here a while ago, but it didnt get much attention. I was better then. Im soooo out of practice I just dont have the time, I wish I did though <3

Thank you very much for all your nice comments feel free to post any other sugestion <3

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Old 11-26-2007, 05:34 PM

Well you definitely got fishy!

I know how that is. Tried acrylic again for the first time in a while. Sucked muchly.

Well I'll be on the look out for more art! I'd love to check out your experimental style. Huzzah for brave art!

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Old 11-27-2007, 05:16 PM

Its not really that experimental. I have a few ideas but sometimes its just sooo hard to put them on paper, bah! they never end up the way I imagen them O.o

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Old 11-27-2007, 08:24 PM

New style. New experiments. :3
That is always the dificulty isn't it? *sigh*

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Old 11-27-2007, 10:59 PM

I think it is quite beautifl. ^^

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Old 11-27-2007, 11:32 PM

Its cute and pretty good... the head is a little to big for the body...you have the concept of the arms and hands but they need some work...

hands suck to draw I hate em lol I have to redo em a million times too...

other than that its good!

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Old 11-28-2007, 12:24 AM

I like it alot. It's very clean(The lines), and it's a pretty pic. You just have to remember that the eyes slope downward a bit, they aren't straight lines. That's basically it. ^^ Very good. I wish I could draw bodies as well as you.

 


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