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Koyuki
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03-26-2007, 11:13 PM

I made up the character. D;
Suggetions on how to improve it? I'm trying to make it look perfect, even though nothing's perfect. Especially from me. xD
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Mondai Kodomo
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03-27-2007, 01:23 AM
Well, I'm not a pixel artist, but I was thinking that perhaps you should make the highlights and shadows a bit more contrasty? It kinda looks flat right now.
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Koyuki
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03-27-2007, 01:38 AM
Will do.
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killuachanx3
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03-27-2007, 01:55 AM
o: Whoa it looks really cool. yeah what mondai said..
but i guess if youre going for the dark look, it looks pretty cool. :333
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Koyuki
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03-27-2007, 01:59 AM
I am going for the dark look.
I think the end of the dress is to like...straight. Dx i don't know how to fix it and still make it look good.
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killuachanx3
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03-27-2007, 02:33 AM
I dont know much about pixels. Never tried. oxo;; But I guess it depends on the shading and try curving it and not make it straight..? o__o;;;
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Koyuki
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03-27-2007, 03:14 AM
I just don't know where to curve.
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GainaSpirit
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03-27-2007, 07:13 AM
You got the pixel quite right on the hair bit it'll would probably look better if you only use pixel and not tools. It's contrasting a bit too much with the body.
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Koyuki
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03-27-2007, 09:02 PM
Okay, though I'm not really good at shading with pixels.
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Koyuki
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03-31-2007, 11:06 PM
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Originally Posted by Kazunomiya_Nanoshi
It looks a tad dull, unless you meant to do that.
And, try not to be so negative about your work. That will help a ton. =)
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I don't think I'm negative. I'm just aware of my skill.
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crystalrev
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03-31-2007, 11:27 PM
I love the hair and the body but I think you need more "uniqueness" in the outfit. ^^;
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Koyuki
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03-31-2007, 11:58 PM
I didn't want it to be anything special.
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ChibiMaru-Chan
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04-06-2007, 06:22 PM
Nice...i like it. if only they did have that kind thing on Gaia...all the stuff there is very expensive right now...o.o but I like it very much! :D
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Koyuki
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04-06-2007, 07:45 PM
Well, thank you. :3
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mangacatgirl
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04-07-2007, 02:40 AM
I really like it, you did a fantastic job. If anything, the only thing I could suggest as any sort of improvement would be that the bottom of the skirt seems a bit too straight. It's pretty much one solid line. Perhaps curving it a bit to go with the body's natural shape might be better? Either way I think it's fantastic. And bravo on the character design concept as well.
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Koyuki
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04-07-2007, 03:21 AM
Well thanks. The problem with the skirt is I don't know where to curve it to make it look right. D;
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mangacatgirl
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04-07-2007, 03:52 AM
Oh, I see. Well, when I'm stumped to know how a certain garment would lie, when drawing... I research it. I put a on a similar item and pose that way and look in the mirror. Or I do an image search for whatever kind of thing it is (skirt, shirt, blouse, vest, duster, gown, whatever). I look at the different images and poses to see how the material moves and use that knowledge toward drawing it myself. You might try that. It couldn't hurt! ^.^
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Koyuki
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04-07-2007, 08:12 PM
That's alot of help, thanks. ^^
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Rawrr__x
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04-07-2007, 11:22 PM
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm the hair is a tad to high off the head on thedress you could use a bit more of shading you could also add some sort of a plushie that always makes the work look spectacular
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Koyuki
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04-08-2007, 02:51 AM
A plushie is a bit off of what I'm going for.
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