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01-03-2008, 03:56 AM
Since my avatar is my OC, you could also say its my avatar.

Her name is Poleena = 3= And, she is supposed to be Russian, does she look russian? And if she doesn't, what do you think would help so she would look russian? It should be obvious for me since I myself am russian, but hell, it's like staring at still drying paint. Its not gonna dry itself! [ worst methophor EVAR ]
Also she is supposed to "look" anorexic [ Meaning people would mistake her for having that eating disorder ] but in this pic she looks healthy to me, or she on the skinny side on some porportions?
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01-03-2008, 03:59 AM
Very impressive, although she looks more or less healthy. Not sure I like her stance though. It looks like she should be falling over. I think the back foot needs to be a bit further back.
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01-03-2008, 04:16 AM
Haha well, I copied the pose off of one of my photos, and the person was leaning on a tree soo @[email protected] I guess I should of drawn a tree so it would of looked more natural? [ Well she wasn't really leaning, just standing a little bit against it ]
And thank you. Yay for being more or less healthy, it's like trying to make an anime character thats in 2-D seem 3-D. Moar metophors...;___;~
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01-03-2008, 11:35 PM
I agree that it looks like she's going to fall over, but another thing that bothers me is her hair. I know it was supposed to be that color but it's seems TOO yellow, like yellow to the point where it looks fake. Other than that, I like it, I love how you drew the clothes ^^
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01-04-2008, 12:55 AM
She doesn't look anorexic, which I kinda like since alot of people make their characters TOO skinny, but if you want her to look, you should try tightening the clothes to show how her body curves and makes her skinny.
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01-04-2008, 07:15 PM
posioned candy- Yeah me too, the skinny porportions get old fast, or rather Ive just seen too much of it @[email protected] Plus, sometimes the character is so skinny, and its unexplained, since for example, the character eats A LOT. Like, SO MUCH HE WOULD THROW UP AND EAT IT BACK UP AGAIN. Lol @ caps. But then again they could have a REAAAAAALLLLLYYYYYY fast metabolisim.
Ill try to make the top seem tighter, thank you : )
Amiiu- I copied the pose~ DB Well her hair could be hair cancer, lol. Ill try to add in more dark yellow and orange though, maybe I made it too yellow because of the rush job. : )
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