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Old 11-17-2007, 10:05 PM

Chapter one

It was the beginning of 1955..
The mansion has been surrounded by a deep thick forest for hundreds of years, It has been remodeled and finally after a long time being a family residence, it has become a school, a girls only school.

Her owner and Principal Mrs Allister was a middle age strict woman with a son who was always after the girls even if her mother strictly forbid him to have any contact with any of the students to avoid problems, he found the ways to leave messages to them or to spy on them at night..etc..

Petra was taken to the Mansion by a friend of her parents when they died in a car accident.
They had left her a good sum of money but she had to spent her few years until she was 18 to get the money and be free from the boarding school.

She was so sad thinking about her parents and her little brother Aidan so far from her in another school a boys only school....why did things had to be that way for them...she didnt know ...she prefered not to think about it much...at least not for now...

She was told her new school was strict, the man who took her there was more interested in her money than in the quality of the school he was putting the kids into and had the bad taste to inscribe them both separatedly where they could never see eachother ...he didnt even answer when Petra asked him if he was coming back for her to take her home for christmas to see Aidan...or if she was allowed to call him in case she didnt like the place....oh ..so many question...so little time they gave to her...

She was left with a letter in the hall of the school...the man hadnt have the time to enter with her, he had arranged everything by the phone a week ago and had paid for scholarship for a year in advanced...

Petra walked the steps and entered the hall where nobody was there...maybe the students are taking classes...she thought and had a look at her watch to confirm it was classes time...

Classes had started like a month ago and she was accepted only under the circumstances of her orphanhood, like there was no other place for her to go.

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Old 11-18-2007, 05:15 AM

Petra entered the hall looking for some help or directions....Mrs Allister wasnt there so she was received by the maid and house keeper Mrs Grove.
"Good Day to you dear child" she said in a calming lovely voice like a granmother..."Have you talked to Mrs Allister yet? are you the new student? we were expecting you at 9, Have you had your breakfast yet? follow me to the kitchen you must be freezing Oh poor child!....
Petra followed the kind lady till the kitchen where she sat down at a large table and was served a cup of hot milk and some bread and cookies....
She was so tired from the long trip that devoured the meal in a few minutes leaving only some cookies ashamed of her voracity and as a showing of good manners...
"Why dont you take those cookies with you in case you feel hungry later dear? " the woman said...."dinner is not really good I have to admit, nor abundant "...she looked at the girl with a kind look and smiled.

Petra thought that if everyone was so kind her life there would be so beautiful in spite of the gloomy atmosphere ....

She finished her milk and put the cookies on her pocket.
"Now Mrs Allister will receive you in her desk" said the old woman guiding her with her hand.
"Remember to always say yes Mrs Allister or no Mrs Allister when she talks to you, she likes well educated girls and it is important that you can do things well since the beginning..."

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Old 11-18-2007, 05:44 AM

As soon as Petra entered the office she noticed the change in the air....Mrs Allister was not an old woman and she had a very athletic body for her years but the severeness on her look and face made her look really older...
She was sat on a big armchair and offered a seat for Petra to sit with a hand move....without a word...
Then she started "Well Well Well so you must be Petra Ivanore, daughter or Peter and Samantha Ivanore, is that right child? she asked...

Petra didnt look directly at her and answered " yes...yes Mrs Allister " she corrected herslef remembering the old woman's words..."though they are both dead" she clarified in a thin voice.

"Oh...I knew about that dear, I am trully sorry....but I expect you feel a family warmth among your teachers and classmates here now" she said

Petra thought about it for a second...how could teachers and classmates replace a family? ...that can never happen....though she thought that she didnt say a word...

"Did you listen to me child?" said Mrs Allister chaging her tone a little.

"Yes Mrs Allister, thank you " said Petra like coming out of a dream.

"Well I think you need to get to know the place, I would show it to you but I have no time so Iw ill let you go around for a while and then be back for lunch at 12 o clock, no delays and Mrs Dove will show you your room now for you to unpack, I see you have a letter for me? " she asked looking at the letter Petra had on her hand, "Is it from your tutor?"

"Yes ma'am", said Petra "He sends it to you as a presentation letter with my scores from the previous school and courses taken"

"Very well very well you can leave it here and now you can go" she said in a hurry tone. "You will be informed in which grade you will be placed after being evaluated by the teachers in the afternoon"

Petra left the room and wondered around the corridors very silently like trying not to make a single noise not to be noticed by anyone...

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Old 11-18-2007, 05:58 AM

All the students at the Mansion werent more than 25, mostly girls around 14-17 years old since they were free to go at the age of 18 or they could work as teachers there if they had no family like Petra, though not really many chose that path, they were all old teachers , really old some of them, so that ment young girls didnt stay.

Petra had a look at the walls around the house and the railings all over the place, now that she looked at it, it looked more like a prison than a school...why so many railing? was that really necesary? she thought it would be for security to prevent thieves from entering the house and attacking students....she never thought it could be to prevent students to scape from the place...

she looked at the lists on the notice boards they belonged to the teachers and they had the grades for every girl, all good students it seemed...she was good but never had pure A's and she had problems with French and maths...
She wondered if she was going to be able to make some progress on those subjects in theis new place...
Her mom had told her once that it was fifty percent on the teacher and fifthy percent on the student's will to learn.
She wondered how her new teachers would be...

suddenly she passed by a door and heard a lot of voices coming out and a lot of steps ...was it break time? seems like a lot of people were coming out of the room at once.
she waited to see how the girls looked from a distant bench on a corner...

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Old 12-30-2007, 04:23 PM

Petra wanted to dissappear she felt shy and small among all those girls who started looking at her with curiosity...she walked a few steps and suddenly remembered she had to go and unpack so she turned and walked towards the kitchen to ask the lady or one of the maids where the dorms were...
she found no one but instead she saw a girl looking sick at the table.
"Hello, Im..Petra Im new here.." she smiled and walked towards her..
"I was wondering if you could tell me where the dorms are..? I need to unpack"

The girl looked pale....she looked at her back and said nothing,,then suddenly like comming out of a dream she answered...
"Im Martle ...the bedrooms are upstairs Im sorry I cannot show you I dont feel good right now..."
Petra sat beside her..."Im so sorry but its alright I'll find the way....what's wrong...? your stomach...?

The girl looked at her with sadness and denied with her head...then looked down...and said nothing..

"Oh...its alright,,,Im sorry I must be bothering you..."

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Old 02-13-2008, 09:29 PM

Petra wondered thru the woods her breath beavy her face and body was still covered in blood the gun still in her hand. she stoped and looked at her hands and the gun "h-he desurved it right?" she asked herself and threw the backpack she was carrying, she started to run once again her golden hair streaking behind her. she could hear the gun go of as it hit the ground she ducked atomaticly as a first reflex. "She over there!" she could hear the man shouting the ones that where chaseing her she got back up and ran hearder as fast as she could. emurging from the cluster of trees she could see a manson looking back she figured it was safer than out there with then. she dashed to the door and sliped in closing it behind her, she strugled for air as her sides heaved and she leaned against the door.
she decided to go back look for the other girl

 


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