It reminds me of a book I read before called 'you don't know me' It makes me wonderif you read it and it inspiered you to write this. xD
I thought it was pretty good and the voice was very dark. The poem was straight forward. I didn;t have to read it over to understand the meaning behind it.
The only promlem I have is right here,
Quote:
You still don't know me
You don't know me
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I had to read it a few times becasue it sounded like the line was repeating.