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Old 03-11-2007, 05:34 AM

I drew this for a friend, could you tell me how it is.
http://i134.photobucket.com/albums/q.../mydrawing.jpg

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Old 03-11-2007, 12:31 PM

That's really cute, but the lines are really light. I love how you chose to give her a bit of shape. Those flowers are so adorable.

:)

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Old 03-11-2007, 05:21 PM

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Originally Posted by Sapphire Clouds
That's really cute, but the lines are really light. I love how you chose to give her a bit of shape. Those flowers are so adorable.

:)

- sapphire
thanks :)

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Old 03-12-2007, 01:57 AM

so cute! the ears and flowers are adorable!

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Old 04-10-2007, 09:14 PM

It looks really good! I'm pretty sure she will be gald that you drew it for her! i know i would! It's such a wonderful art work! Who would not like it? o.O :D

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Old 04-10-2007, 10:13 PM

I think it's very cute. It could use a bit more colour though. It's rather hard to make out because it's so light. The drawing itself is well done I think.

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Old 04-10-2007, 10:25 PM

As other people have said, the lines are a tad light. Maybe darken the outline a little so it stands out more. Also, add a little bit of shading, unless you were going for a simple, flat-coloured look. I like it though. It's cute. :]


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Old 04-10-2007, 10:38 PM

You should color the eyes in. :3

That's all I think is missing really... *Nods*

 


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