Not me. Dx
But I thought it should be critiqued. I have a friend, and I offered to draw a picture for her, so she asked me to draw Miku Hatsune. [Just search Miku Hatsune if you don't know. . .] So I drew her. It took so long, but I was super happy, since it was really good.
Anyways, I was doing the lineart for it when I suddenly messed it up! I inked her bewbs wrong. So yeah. D:
I was so pissed off, I didn't want to draw another Miku Hatsune ever again. D: But I did the next day. Since I was mad, I didn't draw it too detailed, and fast at that. Her hands, especially the left one is fugged up, and I didn't bother making her right leg more....well...closer in, so that it looks...proper or whatever. This is the pencil sketch, so sorry some parts are kinda.....well faded. Here is Miku Hatsune II.
http://tinyurl.com/4ol6cy
Some stuff I noticed on my own:
- Yeah, her legs are fugged up. Kinda wierd.
- The right leg should be closer to her left leg, more....crossed looking.
- Both her hands are horrible. Especially the left hand.
- The leek was drawn horribly! xD It look more of a leak when I colored it. :D
- Forgot to add the collar bones. -_- Sorry! D:
- Forgot to add wrinkles on the arm sleeve things. D<<<
- FORGOT THE FRICKIN EYEBROWS. D: How dumb. -_-
- Shoes are not...really....well...shoe-looking. Especially the left one. :D
- Right pigtail is longer than the left. :D But I fixed that with the lineart and coloring part. :D
- It might just be me...but I think the right eye is kinda lower.
- The leek isn't straight on the bottom part! xD
- Opinion: Her skirt is short! :D [Well, duh. xD]
- At that: The skirt is the wrong type. I only had one chance to look at how Miku looked like...and I couldn't use the internet, so it was from memory. D: Sorry.
Please, only constructive criticism. =]
You can redline if you want and are super nice. :DDDDDDDDDD
And.....there is NO way I am uploading the colored version. :D
I posted art before...that I did in like February or something. I said there that I'm 13 and have been drawing for a year and a half, and some people said I'm still at the beginning stages. :D I pretty much am, so yeah. Dx