I need help with the anatomy of a drawing im in the process of making. D:

Here it is: [edited] see bottom.


I dunno, it looks weird, the lower body is to big or something.
Feel free to draw over it with red or something so i understand ... cause im slow. xD

Edit:

I changed a couple of things ...
http://i17.tinypic.com/4cjj4th.jpg

It takes a whole page btw. Also, it's suppoused to look like a female capitan, kinda saluting or whatever.

the stomach seems a bit long..other wise it seems quite good..im not good with anatomy though

Moon, eso necesita mas cadera.

I think she is to thin and her stomach is too long

It's suppoused to look like it has a corset on... which i'll later draw.

I edited the image.

i like it, its all pretty and stuff D: i think it's good so far, id have to see it with clotheing to see if it works though.

Thanks. :]

Im still deciding what clothes to draw on it.

Hmmm... I'm not so much into the skinny, but I'll see what i can do.

My main concern is that her breasts are too high. They have a nice shape, but if you look at a woman, the brests basically hang down from the pectoral muscles which start under the armpit - so the start of the breast is level with the arm pit.

From what I estimate they will be, her hands are too small - ones hand is supposed ot be around the size of one's face from chin to mid-forehead, a little larger for men.

Her legs are a little long. The point where your legs join your pelvis is a bony landmark and marks the halfway point on your body.

THe knees/elbows/ are rather accented if you're going for something refined. usually, because muscle doesn't collect at joints, they're teh skinniest parts of the limbs - more bony landmarks.

I see a couple of things that you say. Thanks for the c/c. :]