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06-13-2007, 09:37 PM
I tried my hand at making some clothes for menewsha characters. It was a lot of fun and I really enjoyed it. So now I'd like some criticism.
1. What do you think?
2. What should I improve on?
3. Should I try making more?
(Oh yeah, I also changed the eye colors. >>; )
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tigerangel
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06-13-2007, 09:40 PM
I totally love them.
You have awesome talent.
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Koopa King
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06-13-2007, 09:41 PM
That is aweesomee, you should try to make some morre
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06-13-2007, 09:42 PM
Thats pretty good, I like em.
More lighter colors though.
I mean I would just like to see some. xD
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SleepingPumpkin
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06-13-2007, 09:43 PM
I like the dress and the shrug on the third the best. But I'm not much of one for frills. They're all definately really good though. Awesome Job. :P
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Solin
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06-13-2007, 09:48 PM
wow Thank you for all the encouragement.
Yes, brighter colors! The next one I was planning on doing is going to be really bright. The reason these four are rather dark is because I was going for the Elegant Gothic Lolita look.
I'll defiantly do more bright colors though, cuz I love them. x3 <3
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Dangerous Tinfoil Shoes
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06-13-2007, 09:50 PM
I love the girl with the red and white dress, so cute. They are all really great. :D You've got some skillz. XD
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06-13-2007, 09:50 PM
Wow, these are incredible. I really like them. :3
I especially like the girl with red hair... I want that dress for my character so badly now!.... only in pink. xD It's so cute though, really~
I want to see you design more!
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06-13-2007, 09:51 PM
Wow, Those are good!
Maybe you should submit them as suggestions for new clothing or something.
Maybe they'll reward you!
Not that you need it much
lol
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06-13-2007, 09:51 PM
1 - LOVE the tuxedo jacket with the tails. Definitely need those.
2 - I'm actually really unimpressed with this one. Your artwork is great and so is your shading but nothing about this one stands out to me.
3 - Totally in love with everything she's wearing.
4 - Looks pretty similar to 1, but it still looks great.
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06-13-2007, 09:53 PM
Pretty cool, nice job *thumbs up*
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Tea
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06-13-2007, 09:55 PM
Yay go with the cutsie lolli style clothes.
Teehee I like them like that.
Although the whole EGL thing still looks really good.
:3
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Solin
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06-13-2007, 09:57 PM
lol ok list of things to do:
1. make bright colored clothes
2. make a pink dress x3
3. possibly try to see if the powers that be could make them real items (though I probably wouldn't be able to afford my own designs xD )
4. try to improve the blue girl dress
^^ this is great! I really appreciate this feed back.
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06-13-2007, 10:05 PM
Yayyy a pink dress. xD
I can't wait to see other things that you're going to design. ^^
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06-13-2007, 10:16 PM
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Yayyy a pink dress. xD
I can't wait to see other things that you're going to design. ^^
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I think I'm gonna hop off for a while and try to get more done. I wanna get at least 3 done tonight so I can post them either tonight, or tomorrow morning. It should go pretty fast since I already drew out some of the ones I want to make next and I'll get on that pink dress too. ^^
This was my first one (and the only other one I've done besides those four) :
The shading and design aren't that great though. I'm not incredibly happy with it now.. but I guess it was a good first try.
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06-13-2007, 10:34 PM
That new one is great...is it a dress? If not then I love the top but I'm not as impressed by the bottom...needs something to make it pop. :P
(Took me forever to find this thread again after they moved it.)
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Solin
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06-17-2007, 01:45 AM
Sorry it took so long, and I don't have more to post right now. I've been pretty busy with other things, but~ I did finish the pink dress for IshokuOsero. x3

I hope it looks ok. Don't wanna disappoint anyone. o.o;
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06-17-2007, 01:59 AM
Oh wow, that is so cute! <3
You're really skilled~ ^^
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Winterwolfgoddess
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06-17-2007, 04:18 AM
I love the first edits you have on this page, and the only thing i really see that needs to be improved upon is the black areas. They need to be shaded. ^^
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06-17-2007, 03:18 PM
Hn Good work kiddo. You've really improved I wish my writing would. any way see ya around.
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Solin
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06-17-2007, 03:22 PM
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I love the first edits you have on this page, and the only thing i really see that needs to be improved upon is the black areas. They need to be shaded. ^^
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I agree. I need to work on that more. ^^; I'll do my best to fix it. Thank you for pointing that out! I really like it when people give criticism rather than just saying 'wow thats great!' so that I can know what I need to work on to improve. ^^
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06-17-2007, 03:22 PM
- Those are amazing; especially the female outfits...
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Solin
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06-17-2007, 04:46 PM
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- Those are amazing; especially the female outfits...
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Thank you. I'm trying to come up with more boy ones too but its a bit harder.
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06-17-2007, 05:25 PM
Ooh, awesome! I especially like the third one~ C:
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06-17-2007, 06:07 PM

How long did it take you to make them? They're fantastic!
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