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Old 06-13-2007, 09:37 PM

I tried my hand at making some clothes for menewsha characters. It was a lot of fun and I really enjoyed it. So now I'd like some criticism.

1. What do you think?
2. What should I improve on?
3. Should I try making more?



(Oh yeah, I also changed the eye colors. >>; )

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Old 06-13-2007, 09:40 PM

I totally love them.
You have awesome talent.

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Old 06-13-2007, 09:41 PM

That is aweesomee, you should try to make some morre

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Old 06-13-2007, 09:42 PM

Thats pretty good, I like em.

More lighter colors though.

I mean I would just like to see some. xD

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Old 06-13-2007, 09:43 PM

I like the dress and the shrug on the third the best. But I'm not much of one for frills. They're all definately really good though. Awesome Job. :P

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Old 06-13-2007, 09:48 PM

wow Thank you for all the encouragement.

Yes, brighter colors! The next one I was planning on doing is going to be really bright. The reason these four are rather dark is because I was going for the Elegant Gothic Lolita look.

I'll defiantly do more bright colors though, cuz I love them. x3 <3

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Old 06-13-2007, 09:50 PM

I love the girl with the red and white dress, so cute. They are all really great. :D You've got some skillz. XD

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Old 06-13-2007, 09:50 PM

Wow, these are incredible. I really like them. :3
I especially like the girl with red hair... I want that dress for my character so badly now!.... only in pink. xD It's so cute though, really~
I want to see you design more!

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Old 06-13-2007, 09:51 PM

Wow, Those are good!

Maybe you should submit them as suggestions for new clothing or something.

Maybe they'll reward you!

Not that you need it much

lol

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Old 06-13-2007, 09:51 PM

1 - LOVE the tuxedo jacket with the tails. Definitely need those.

2 - I'm actually really unimpressed with this one. Your artwork is great and so is your shading but nothing about this one stands out to me.

3 - Totally in love with everything she's wearing.

4 - Looks pretty similar to 1, but it still looks great.

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Old 06-13-2007, 09:53 PM

Pretty cool, nice job *thumbs up*

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Old 06-13-2007, 09:55 PM

Yay go with the cutsie lolli style clothes.

Teehee I like them like that.

Although the whole EGL thing still looks really good.

:3

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Old 06-13-2007, 09:57 PM

lol ok list of things to do:
1. make bright colored clothes
2. make a pink dress x3
3. possibly try to see if the powers that be could make them real items (though I probably wouldn't be able to afford my own designs xD )
4. try to improve the blue girl dress

^^ this is great! I really appreciate this feed back.

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Old 06-13-2007, 10:05 PM

Yayyy a pink dress. xD
I can't wait to see other things that you're going to design. ^^

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Old 06-13-2007, 10:16 PM

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Yayyy a pink dress. xD
I can't wait to see other things that you're going to design. ^^
I think I'm gonna hop off for a while and try to get more done. I wanna get at least 3 done tonight so I can post them either tonight, or tomorrow morning. It should go pretty fast since I already drew out some of the ones I want to make next and I'll get on that pink dress too. ^^

This was my first one (and the only other one I've done besides those four) :

The shading and design aren't that great though. I'm not incredibly happy with it now.. but I guess it was a good first try.

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Old 06-13-2007, 10:34 PM

That new one is great...is it a dress? If not then I love the top but I'm not as impressed by the bottom...needs something to make it pop. :P

(Took me forever to find this thread again after they moved it.)

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Old 06-17-2007, 01:45 AM

Sorry it took so long, and I don't have more to post right now. I've been pretty busy with other things, but~ I did finish the pink dress for IshokuOsero. x3

I hope it looks ok. Don't wanna disappoint anyone. o.o;

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Old 06-17-2007, 01:59 AM

Oh wow, that is so cute! <3
You're really skilled~ ^^

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Old 06-17-2007, 04:18 AM

I love the first edits you have on this page, and the only thing i really see that needs to be improved upon is the black areas. They need to be shaded. ^^

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Old 06-17-2007, 03:18 PM

Hn Good work kiddo. You've really improved I wish my writing would. any way see ya around.

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Old 06-17-2007, 03:22 PM

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I love the first edits you have on this page, and the only thing i really see that needs to be improved upon is the black areas. They need to be shaded. ^^
I agree. I need to work on that more. ^^; I'll do my best to fix it. Thank you for pointing that out! I really like it when people give criticism rather than just saying 'wow thats great!' so that I can know what I need to work on to improve. ^^

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Old 06-17-2007, 03:22 PM

  • Those are amazing; especially the female outfits...

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Old 06-17-2007, 04:46 PM

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  • Those are amazing; especially the female outfits...
Thank you. I'm trying to come up with more boy ones too but its a bit harder.

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Old 06-17-2007, 05:25 PM

Ooh, awesome! I especially like the third one~ C:

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Old 06-17-2007, 06:07 PM



How long did it take you to make them? They're fantastic!

 


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