I love the corpse bride look. Maybe the transparent organza hairpin and a background? The graveyard and night sky would be perfect I think.

pink on the head :)

Let it be.

Note: ignore the squirrel, tis for the event that I wear it.

*dutifully ignores hand nomming squirrel with some effort* It's lovely, don't change a thing!

Hmmm.... I can't totally say what it is but something looks a bit off
sorry hahaha

Orange in the middle. Is there an orange waist clincher?

Well....since Sweets decided not to be helpful at all.... >_< Let's try this again...

Hmm...add some white shoes and maybe some sort of handheld item(s).

I am so soy about not being helpful :(
hmm I think leave it. It does look really good despite what I say

Lose the Fox hat. It confuses me with the chicken feet...

Black on the feet. Black heels should layer under your shoes and work that way.

Maybe take out the cookie thing. Other than that, nothing.

The arms feel empty, add something there, maybe gloves.

I say leave it, Enzeru. :) You look smashing.

Saravi Boo: OMG! YOU LOOK AWESOME!

Took Carzee's advice and got black on the feet.
Apricot: I'm not quite sure what it is but there's something around the middle that's not working for me... could just be the excessive amount of powder blue. But otherwise, looking good!

Add some black gloves.

Don't change a thing. You look amazing!

I don't like that cookie thing in the right hand, ditch it, otherwise very nice indeed

I would get rid of the purple in the caged heart. There's no other purple on the avatar.

Get some pants? Lol. Other than that it's fine.

Don't change a thing. It looks great. :yes:

you need a green belt, or panties of something.. the yellow stripe looks funny...

I think you look just fine. :)

Perhaps some read on your head would look nice.

dont change it!.... ever!!!
It's gorgeous!!!

Uhhhh.... Is this a joke? Nah, just kidding... add a belt, maybe that green waist bow? I'm really not sure.