Good: Very bright and happy avatar
Harsh: Add some red under that skirt somehow.

{ good } I love that colouring! Vey unique
[ harsh ] you still need a bit more of the purperly colour

Good: I love the mysticalishness of it.
Harsh: Maybe some white around the top of your legs?

Goodness: Orange! My favorite color :drool:

Badness: So simple! :gonk:

good: i love love love those colors! and you have so many! o.O
harsh: open your eyes girl! grey would look nice :yes:

Good: Very nice color combination!
Harsh: Perhaps you should have your avi holding an item, what item I don't know. But it looks a little bare.

Good: Very lovely and princess like
Harsh: Hair doesn't match.

Edit: please don't be the same person replying to me every time, let someone else reply.

I'm loving the colour scheme

however I don't think you need the white socks or the silver star hair-clips, and the silver bits on the arms could go, it all makes it look a bit busy

1) its come a long way from when it started
2) maybe green gloves, because it looks very plain right now.

good: nice hair
Harsh: Never mix primary colors with secondary colors they are not related to. It clashes hard. Just a fashon rule.

Good; I like the theme and colours
harsh; I don't like the smoke, but there isn't much else you can use to fill that space that would fit.

Black Phoebe: good: its looking a lot better, and coming along nicely. i think you could add some green gloves or like a (be back have to cite this)

harsh: i think it looks plain, but your choice. gloves and a black headband would look nice.


EDIT: ok i think you'll like these gloves because their small (and green!) http://www.menewsha.com/shops/index....&id=13&page=23

and this hand accessory (the green harem sleeve gloves at the bottom) would also be a lovely alternative:
http://www.menewsha.com/shops/index....&id=13&page=32

EDIT #2: oooh and i found 2 head bands you might like! the basic black headband, im not sure if its the right shade though (on the last page of 52). and the valentina licorice bow on page 2 of head works

good: Its coming along so nice!

harsh: Its very middle/ top heavy to me. It needs a little something at your feet. Is there some sort of purple Anklet? Also your hair is so blinding! xD Have you tried the white double belt? I feel the belt you have on now is a bit too.. straight for your Avi. I think the double belt would give it a slight more flow.

Good: unique
Harsh: the only thing good I can say about it is that it's unique.

Bad One: Maybe you should switch he second and primary haircolor
Good One: I love how you use that wonderful dress, i dont see it often ^^

It's interesting how you managed to fit in so many colours

but it seems rather cluttered and a bit too random to be visually appealing

Good: She is getting there. I am slowly liking your Avi more and more xD

Bad: I would add a small hat to your Avi. Like the small Voodoo one.

{ good } OMG she looks so just bleh ahahahha.... like she doesnt really care anymore :)
[ harsh ] take off the hearts :) the avvi looked awsome without them

good: its very nice for a white black green avatar, i've never seen that!
harsh: i think your hair is supposed to be that color right? so i'm not going to pick at it being off white. maybe a black or green headband would accent your head. it looks empty compared to the rest of the avatar

Good: I like this one! It's like a modern Pocahontas! (and not blue!)
Harsh: Too much leg skin! Mhm, you need socks!

Good: Its a very good start. Silver/black/ purple is always on of my favorite combos!
Harsh: purple by your feet to start ^_^

Good: What a colorful avi you have! :)
Harsh: Everything seems rather cluttered..

Good: The theme is well translated and just absolutely lovely
Harsh: The black seems a bit accidental and out of place.

Good: I still love the theme of this avatar, it's absolutely beautiful.
Harsh: The blue tint to the hair is out of place, maybe a grey tint would work better? I know the hair thing is a mission to work though, so maybe just add that blue somewhere else to balance it.

Good: love the theme and the colors you are using
Harsh: it looks incomplete but I can see what you are planning on doing
um... the necklace adds a bit of gold that isn't matched anywhere else