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#3126
Old 12-13-2011, 06:25 AM

A brighter red on your feet wouldn't go amiss. Maybe the bright red tube socks with some teal ankle socks over them, and then, (If you want to keep the gold on your feet) Some of those sunlit roman sandals would look good.

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#3127
Old 12-13-2011, 08:00 PM

maybe add some gold to the avi to match the gold on the ornaments

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#3128
Old 12-14-2011, 08:04 AM

Don't change a thing.

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#3129
Old 12-14-2011, 02:58 PM

ooh pretty avi...

i'm iffy about the white overshirt, but everything looks good :thumbsup:

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#3130
Old 12-14-2011, 11:33 PM

I like how you've got the lights. I love those lights LOL

But I'm thinking the hair stands out a lot against everything else.
So maybe change that up a bit? (:

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#3131
Old 12-15-2011, 04:29 AM

You seem a little incomplete, maybe grow a face somehow?

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#3132
Old 12-15-2011, 07:40 AM

You can try adding gold shorts under the skirt and gold arm jewelry.

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#3133
Old 12-15-2011, 09:33 PM

Don't change anything! :heart:

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#3134
Old 12-15-2011, 09:59 PM

Your avi makes me drool ORZ I love all the layering you've done. D;

Anyway I think if anything, it needs a little something around the ankle area -
maybe like raven anklewings or something? @ -@ The puffy hair makes it a teeny bit top heavy, imo.

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#3135
Old 12-15-2011, 10:02 PM

I think that like Roka, you're a little top heavy, with the hat and the wings. But having ankle wings would be overkill, so I'm not really sure how to fix it.

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#3136
Old 12-16-2011, 12:17 AM

maybe some way to distinguish the skirt from the red tinsel?

(for the next person, I understand that my hair color stands out too much. I just don't want to change it since i've actually had the same color since I joined. I changed it once by accident before i went back.)

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#3137
Old 12-17-2011, 12:57 AM

You look like a singer in a J-Pop or K-pop band. So, if that's what you were going for, don't change a thing!

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#3138
Old 12-17-2011, 01:58 AM

Try turning on Hide Eyes, I can sort of see the built in eye under that one from Eyes of the Wild, and it throws me off a little.

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#3139
Old 12-18-2011, 07:54 AM

Add: Green to the head :)

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#3140
Old 12-18-2011, 01:35 PM

I would get rid of the anklets. They don't really match anything and they're green.

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#3141
Old 12-20-2011, 11:26 PM

Don't change a thing.

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#3142
Old 12-21-2011, 12:58 AM

Maybe add some red to the base. Red short socks?

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#3143
Old 12-21-2011, 02:08 PM

Really liking it right now -
I'd say don't change a thing.

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#3144
Old 12-22-2011, 01:21 AM

Add some eyes...? o __o;;

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#3145
Old 12-22-2011, 01:46 AM

don't change a thing ^_^

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#3146
Old 12-24-2011, 04:55 AM

Hmm...maybe change the skin tone, that one sort of clashes with the beige you've got on.

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#3147
Old 12-24-2011, 11:01 AM

Don't change a thing!

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#3148
Old 12-24-2011, 03:00 PM

I like the simplicity of it, and how you matched the ticket (:
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#3149
Old 12-24-2011, 04:52 PM

So pretty! * 0*
Don't change anything! Except for perhaps the shoulder feathers, as it's red compared to the pink on the rest of the avatar~

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#3150
Old 12-24-2011, 05:07 PM

Hmm...change the white skin...it is weird with the warm tones of the rest of the avi.

 


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