Aoi Kazuya
"I'm nobody, who are you?"
|
|

12-25-2011, 01:18 AM
lol, the ticket looks out of place XD but that's completely fine, lol
|
|
|
|
Antagonist
The Great Adversary
☆☆☆ Penpal
|
|

12-25-2011, 06:44 AM
@Saravi: B-but I'm always chalk white! :gonk: (j/k, I don't mind, I just prefer using the ghostly pale skin :XD)
@Aoi: Looks good! Though the goldness of the bells and the mug of hot chocolate look a bit out of place with the rest of the color theme. :O
|
|
|
|
`Haru
Useful Idiot
|
|

12-25-2011, 04:29 PM
maybe a pair of boxer removals. :oops:
|
|
|
|
Aoi Kazuya
"I'm nobody, who are you?"
|
|

12-26-2011, 01:27 AM
uwaaa.... i like your avi 'Haru leave it as is?
@fading: this better?
|
|
|
|
Bearzy
dusting off the cobwebs
☆☆☆☆☆☆ Penpal
|
|

12-26-2011, 11:24 PM
Maybe some teal on the legs? To match your hair.
|
|
|
|
Saravi Boo
Licking threads since 2010!
☆
|
|

12-27-2011, 01:44 AM
Add something to her arms like some of those furry sleeves. It looks odd for her to have fuzzy earmuffs and boots with bare arms.
|
|
|
|
Aoi Kazuya
"I'm nobody, who are you?"
|
|

12-27-2011, 01:47 AM
I swear that ticket looks out of place on most outfits XD
|
|
|
|
DaisyKeehl
Inactive menace
☆
|
|

12-27-2011, 06:39 PM
The little bells are kind of distracting.
|
|
|
|
Bearzy
dusting off the cobwebs
☆☆☆☆☆☆ Penpal
|
|

12-27-2011, 09:14 PM
The pink from the ears and the bubble looks a little out of place.
|
|
|
|
Death_to_the_reaper
I'm alive. Message me if you rem...
|
|

12-27-2011, 10:47 PM
I agree with Aoi, the tickets look out of place.
|
|
|
|
Aoi Kazuya
"I'm nobody, who are you?"
|
|

12-28-2011, 06:11 AM
can I just say how much I love your avi? don't change :D
btw, if I need to add or replace something, can you guys tell me what to add or replace with exactly?
|
|
|
|
Draciolus
(っ◕‿◕)&...
|
|

12-28-2011, 07:34 AM
I think the only thing you could change, is the colour of your shoes. Maybe go a lighter colour, if not just go with a white/silver.
|
|
|
|
Bearzy
dusting off the cobwebs
☆☆☆☆☆☆ Penpal
|
|

12-28-2011, 09:07 AM
Haha! You look so cool! Change nothing!
|
|
|
|
Avatre
⊙ω⊙
|
|

12-28-2011, 09:43 AM
The only thing I can think of to change on yours Carzee, is get a background of some sort that has yellows and a bit of red and blue.
|
|
|
|
MoodyBats
Scarce Menewshan
☆☆
|
|

12-28-2011, 12:53 PM
I think you should change the hair color.
|
|
|
|
DaisyKeehl
Inactive menace
☆
|
|

12-28-2011, 02:13 PM
Change nothing :D!
|
|
|
|
Mystic
(ο・㉨・&...
☆
|
|

12-28-2011, 05:46 PM
I'd make the hair colour match. It's cute blonde but there's no other yellow aside from on the ticket.
|
|
|
|
Avatre
⊙ω⊙
|
|

12-28-2011, 06:05 PM
I like it, but the hair almost seems to get lost in Mene's white background. Maybe add a background, but I cant think of one that would work for your avi.
|
|
|
|
Wings of Writing
~★St☆rlight★~
☆☆☆☆
|
|

12-28-2011, 08:09 PM
I think if you added something layered over top the dress just to break up the amount of gold and bring more of the red and green into your avi it would look awesome.
|
|
|
|
McNugget
¯\_(ツ)_/¯
☆☆☆☆☆
|
|

12-28-2011, 08:33 PM
I can't think of anything that could be added or removed! Don't change a thing. It looks fantastic!
|
|
|
|
Bearzy
dusting off the cobwebs
☆☆☆☆☆☆ Penpal
|
|

12-28-2011, 09:46 PM
Maybe a couple more white accents? The tail and such look a bit out of place.
|
|
|
|
DaisyKeehl
Inactive menace
☆
|
|

12-29-2011, 02:31 AM
The red from the ticket is distracting me abit. I will ignore that sooo don't change a thing.
|
|
|
|
Linnea
☠ ☠ ☠
☆☆☆☆☆☆☆ Moderator
|
|

12-29-2011, 07:53 AM
the colors are balanced... i wouldn't add anything
wait... after a second look, maybe the white maids collar with the black middle
Last edited by Linnea; 12-29-2011 at 07:55 AM..
|
|
|
|
Bearzy
dusting off the cobwebs
☆☆☆☆☆☆ Penpal
|
|

12-29-2011, 09:29 PM
Change nothing. You look awesome.
|
|
|
|
woohoohelloppl
Lurking
☆☆☆☆
|
|

12-29-2011, 11:32 PM
Don't change a thing.
|
|
|
|
Currently Active Users Viewing This Thread: 1 (0 members and 1 guests) |
|
|
|