Greetings!
Would BSW rate and critique me please?
I'm trying to work on my avi making skills

Originally Posted by SuperZombiePotatoe

Greetings!
Would BSW rate and critique me please?
I'm trying to work on my avi making skills

its very interesting but you need some yellow and white on the head, assuming the hair is going to be black. just for balance. i really like the skirt layering and the leg layering. its interesting and could easily be missed.

9/10

I was wondering about the head actually. Maybe a headband?

*wanders in and waves*

hey yeah guys 'waves ' how you doing?

Hello star!

Can I get your opinion on my alice avi?

Originally Posted by SuperZombiePotatoe

I was wondering about the head actually. Maybe a headband?

you could do something real strange and have the hair pink, and then use the black and yellow lolita head band thing and a white hairpin.

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Originally Posted by CosmicFoxKitty

Can I get your opinion on my alice avi?

i think its perfect! literally. i dont think anything could make it better

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Originally Posted by star2000shadow

hey yeah guys 'waves ' how you doing?

hey hey! im ok i guess everything considered. My Nonna just passed. but she has been sick for over a year.

May I have a rating and advice on my current avatar please?

BSW could you send me the item suggestions you made about my avatar?

Originally Posted by McNugget

May I have a rating and advice on my current avatar please?

that is beyond creepy! i love it! all the blood and the ravens.. so cool. i especially love the explosion in the back. I have no idea how you accomplished that, but it looks wicked! I will say that the very foreground seems a little bare, i am feeling the same way with my avatar... not sure what would fix that though. i used a frame, but that really wouldnt work with your avatar... so i would say leave it. its great the way it is.

10/10

Thanks BSW

By the way, The background was a layering incident that ended up looking good so I kept it Behind the house from the sunny side-up CI is the background from the tome of nightmares layered on the background from Indra's storms in case you were wondering~

Originally Posted by Kirin Rosenbaum

BSW could you send me the item suggestions you made about my avatar?

yes indeedy. also, I am not sure if you like the direction i took with the rp. if you want me to change it I will.

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Originally Posted by McNugget

Thanks BSW

By the way, The background was a layering incident that ended up looking good so I kept it Behind the house from the sunny side-up CI is the background from the tome of nightmares layered on the background from Indra's storms in case you were wondering~

wait, that explosion is always there and i never noticed it????!!!?what the waht!? no wait i read that wrong. its the lava fro the tome of nightmares. well, it looks awesome.

lol it's not really an explosion. It's part of a volcano .


Ohhh.. I see you found out.. Hahaha <_>. I feel so stupid

I thought It had something to do with bonfires

Thanks for the thoughts :3

Hey BSW!! How are you?!

Can I get a rate on this??

Originally Posted by CrimsonShadow

Hey BSW!! How are you?!

Can I get a rate on this??

its very strange...i honestly am not sure what i think. the avatar is an alien so it technically matches, but the red and white verses the green and yellow is offsetting to me. the alien itself is freaky looking to be honest...and i guess i hardly ever think of aliens as freaky. its very off putting and unsettling. so if that is what you are going for, you did fabulously. as an avatar, there is nothing 'wrong' with it, great layering, interesting concept, great facial expression etc. It is just so offsetting for me that i cant say i like it.

9/10

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Originally Posted by CosmicFoxKitty

Thanks for the thoughts :3

any time.

^_^ I stayed up all night lol I'm so lame xD

Originally Posted by bloodstainedwings

yes indeedy. also, I am not sure if you like the direction i took with the rp. if you want me to change it I will.

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wait, that explosion is always there and i never noticed it????!!!?what the waht!? no wait i read that wrong. its the lava fro the tome of nightmares. well, it looks awesome.

I do. I am just waiting for inspiration and am saving for the robe you suggested. What do you think of the hair?

actually i really like it the way it is right now. just those two items and the hair really makes a difference. now you just need a head item that matches the skirt and you are all set!

Originally Posted by bloodstainedwings

actually i really like it the way it is right now. just those two items and the hair really makes a difference. now you just need a head item that matches the skirt and you are all set!

What would you suggest for the head?

no idea, why not go into the hats store and preview anything you think might work and when you find something that will, buy it. thats what i normally do.

Not a lot of extra golds to do that.

Originally Posted by bloodstainedwings

its very strange...i honestly am not sure what i think. the avatar is an alien so it technically matches, but the red and white verses the green and yellow is offsetting to me. the alien itself is freaky looking to be honest...and i guess i hardly ever think of aliens as freaky. its very off putting and unsettling. so if that is what you are going for, you did fabulously. as an avatar, there is nothing 'wrong' with it, great layering, interesting concept, great facial expression etc. It is just so offsetting for me that i cant say i like it.

9/10

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any time.

Yes! That's what I was going for^^ Thanks BSW!!