How about this then? It's close to the original.

yeah alright. as long as you are happy with it. that is all that matters.

I am happy with it but I want your opinion~

It looks great. I dont know why those trees are growing on the ocean floor, but it looks great.

Please give me your opinion, O wing-y one!

Originally Posted by Libra

Please give me your opinion, O wing-y one!

lol. sure thing.

I love the warrior spirit. it reminds me a lot of the dungeon and dragon episode of reboot.... if you are old enough to know what that is... and live in canada because i dont think it aired anywhere else. anyways....

while i do love it, it lookd very much like a set. perhaps you should change up some of the armor or armor from another ci? maybe use the dragon boots that are a commons item in the armory? the fire on the forehead i also dont really understand... so thats about the most of it.

8/10

Originally Posted by bloodstainedwings

lol. sure thing.

I love the warrior spirit. it reminds me a lot of the dungeon and dragon episode of reboot.... if you are old enough to know what that is... and live in canada because i dont think it aired anywhere else. anyways....

while i do love it, it lookd very much like a set. perhaps you should change up some of the armor or armor from another ci? maybe use the dragon boots that are a commons item in the armory? the fire on the forehead i also dont really understand... so thats about the most of it.

8/10

First off, thank you for the time you put into giving me this critique ^_^

Haha, if you're talking about the show with these characters than I know exactly what you're talking about! Though I haven't seen the show in forever, and don't know what episode you are speaking of, maybe I should try looking them up on the internet to watch them again... >_>

I haven't figured out a way to incorporate something black or red into the helmet, so the only thing I could think of to break up the silver up there was to add a flame like the candles had, but I guess it just looks silly in the end.

I didn't even think about the commons in the armory. That was a genius idea! I'll have to play around with these a bit more...

Originally Posted by Libra

First off, thank you for the time you put into giving me this critique ^_^

Haha, if you're talking about the show with these characters than I know exactly what you're talking about! Though I haven't seen the show in forever, and don't know what episode you are speaking of, maybe I should try looking them up on the internet to watch them again... >_>

I haven't figured out a way to incorporate something black or red into the helmet, so the only thing I could think of to break up the silver up there was to add a flame like the candles had, but I guess it just looks silly in the end.

I didn't even think about the commons in the armory. That was a genius idea! I'll have to play around with these a bit more...

so far it looks a lot better! that little bit of red is perfect from the chest plate!

also, yes... yes I am talking about that show. I freken love Reboot. I have the whole thing on DVD.

huh interesting avis, hey bsw 'waves' star's leg's healing upa gain, seems we caught the infection before it could do to much damage.

yay! i am glad you are feeling better!

So I'm unsure about the lanterns....

Originally Posted by bloodstainedwings

yay! i am glad you are feeling better!

me to. especially as i have to shop on monday 'sigh'

Originally Posted by Kirin Rosenbaum

So I'm unsure about the lanterns....

they dont match the rest of your avatar as there is not really any brown or cream to tie it together. maybe you can try adding brown and cream to your avatar?

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Originally Posted by star2000shadow

me to. especially as i have to shop on monday 'sigh'

ohhh! what are you shopping for?

I am going to watch Maleficent with my bestie! and probably go to some banks... try and see if i can get a better deal somewhere and maybe switch banks.

yeah... but then again they do match the pillows...

yes they match the pillows. but the pillows didnt match your avatar either. and right now, the blue sky doesnt match your avatar. there has to be something connecting the avatar to the background inorder for it to match properly in my opinion.

Please rate this avi??

Originally Posted by Wings of Writing

Please rate this avi??

I am so glad you asked! I saw your avatar somewhere else and thought to myself "man that's an nice avatar" I love the tiki colour with the harpy colour. they just play off each other so well. and the clever use of the wings to balance out the tail is wonderful. I also love the hints of gold, but that is where the matchy matchy in me is freaking out a bit. The gold necklace is too light and not orange enough to match the gold in the tail and crown. I think you need to replace it with something that would be a better colour match or just remove it entirely. Its beautiful, but not needed and kinda messes with the matchy matchy. outside of that, you avatar is perfect! Its been a while since I have seen a pretty panties outfit and it is always nice to see them.

9.5/10

Originally Posted by bloodstainedwings

they dont match the rest of your avatar as there is not really any brown or cream to tie it together. maybe you can try adding brown and cream to your avatar?

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ohhh! what are you shopping for?

I am going to watch Maleficent with my bestie! and probably go to some banks... try and see if i can get a better deal somewhere and maybe switch banks.

went for food. 'nods' got my self some quarts crystal's today so i can use them to help with my mood 'nods' i work better with amythest but those where to expensive where as the quarts was only a buck each so i got two small ones 'nods'

I find moonstone helps best with my moods, but i think everyone is different.

Would love to find a stone that helps with being tired all the time.

Originally Posted by bloodstainedwings

yay! i am glad you are feeling better!

me to.. problem is.. I've run out of tape so i can't wear my ace wraps anymore 'sigh' and i need those to keep my legs from swelling 'growels' darn it all to hades and back.

oh star. hopefully you will be 100% soon.

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Originally Posted by Kirin Rosenbaum

Would love to find a stone that helps with being tired all the time.

being tired all the time might be related to your diet. are you eating enough fruits and vegetables? are you eating them at the right time of day? are you having large meals before sleeping? are you getting enough iron? or other essential nutrients?

I don't have large meals before bed. I eat lots of fruits and veggies, but I do have low iron. I am on the low side of acceptable.

well that might be it. talk to your doctor about getting iron suppliments maybe? or just talk to your doctor about feeling tired all the time.

My boyfriend drinks caffeinated drinks all the time and actually has more energy when he doesnt drink them. So, that could be it too. I hardly ever drink very caffeinated drinks. The most I drink is tea.

I hardly drink caffeinated drinks. And I would go tot he doctors but I can't afford it.