-shrug- That's fine with me. ^u^ I do think, though, if he ever wished to drink from Serenity, he'd have to get mean. The first few times, I doubt she would let him, unless she owed him for something, and he was dying or something.

oh I was not planing on him being nice the first few times. if she dose something in Winterhome that upsets him he will show his true colors as some would say. but at this time he is playing the velvet glove with her.

-nod, nod-

Also, if the time ever came where he did free her, I doubt Serenity would be able to return home. No matter how much her family loves her, because of the timeline we are playing, a female wouldn't have been welcomed home after spending so long with a male who was not a member of her family.

unless he was her teacher.
but if he teachers her magic and then sets her free she has a way to support herself with no problem.

That would be true. Even as a teacher, she would be expected to have an older female with her as a chaperon. But if she was able to support herself, then it wouldn't matter.

so you are liking Alen? I am trying to make him cold but not turely a monster. granted he sees himself as a monster and ravels in it. but he is not.

I like Alen. ^u^ Especially how he's all mysterious. ^u^

Is Serenity alright?

only complaint I have... is you keep calling her The Female.... I do not understand that but hay if that is how you write I will not complain.

XD I tend to type names too much, so I try to find other ways to refer to them it usually ends up being 'the girl, female, woman' things like that. I'll keep it in mind, and try to refrain from using it, though. ^u^

her, she, and by name work. its just feels like when you use the girl, female, the woman its being written by an outside person and then you have her feelings and thoughts it just is odd to me.

I've never thought of that before. It's a good point. Thank you.

your welcome. if you feel there is something about how I am writting point it out. I love to have help improving.

Will do. ^u^

odd question, how many kingdoms should we have surrounding our little kingdom?

Hmmm...how about ocean on one side, mountains on the other, and two kingdoms with borders connected to this kingdom.

so there could be a third kingdom on the other side of the mountains but no one ever has tried to pass through the mountains.

If you'd like that, I am fine with it. ^u^

gives us three kingdoms to play with. though one of them will soon be allies with our kingdom.

Sounds like a plan.

I think the kingdom over the mountain is going to be the one that is going to cause our little kingdom the most trouble.

That's fine by me.

so any ideas for the other kingdoms names?

So, there are no servants with Alen?

Let me think on it, and I'll get back to ya.

he dose not have any with him. the stable hands would help her with her trunks.

Alright. Will he have servants at his home, is Serenity expected to clean, or what are we going to do with that?