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Old 08-12-2011, 09:11 AM

Score for Shelby! Only a few weeks after getting the internet and she's already got a pure friend-based love! Yay! I could wish for nothing more! And of course I would draw that for you! Not only do you make me laugh, but you also got me into this site and are now my friend! And I like doing nice things for my friends... Plus, staying in my room all the time, I have plenty of time to do it!

I see what you mean about that now that you mention it. I've got a bit of OCD so I'd also do that. Alright I pick.... seventeen! It's easier for me to relate to a seventeen year old since I wasn't seventeen that long ago! And in boredom she might have decided to check out what was in the storage room and then found the doll and then wanted to put the choker back on it.
What is your way to convey a character, if I may ask? I always have a hard time with that, and I'm a stickler for details, so I end up writing a really long thing down.

And I understand why you would think of murder all the time! I have no reason aside from intense paranoia and anxiety!


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Old 08-12-2011, 09:19 AM

I'm glad I could help you, my friend! And I've seen your drawing, I'm sure it will appear professional. I'm glad you are around, now the site will be less boring! So much less boring... Yes, yes. I wish I could stay in my room a little more. Alas, work calls, and I must depart to attend to the problems of the others, which is of little bother!

All right then, that sounds like a good idea. I like the idea, I do indeed. Although, since my character is still in his sleep in the beginning, you would have to start the thread, or at least the first official post!
And this way is a bit long, would you like to see it in this thread? I've got a character already occupying it, so you can see how I had it laid out.

Oh, I can take my mind off it for a while, but obviously my brain would rather focus on it, at least in the back of my mind all the time!

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Old 08-12-2011, 09:21 AM

And where do I go to start the offical post? And yes, I would like to see it!! I don't mind long things, I'll check it out while you go to work before I go to bed!

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Old 08-12-2011, 09:27 AM

In the RolePlaying forum. Go to "Private RolePlays" since it will only be between us. You can name the thread something catchy, or something related to the plot like a normal book, or put whatever you like. And in the first post you can just jump right into the first post if you like. Ah, and here, my character profile. Just to let you know, "history" is not finished quite yet. And please ignore the completely different character described there, it's for another idea I'm probably not going to use!

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Name: Larissa Sutton

Age: Appears 27, actual age unknown

Gender: Female

Species/Race: Human, origin unknown

Voice: Her voice is hinted with a Western accent, but not strongly-so. She is very outspoken, with a loud, demanding voice that sets her personality as a very independent and powerful woman. It’s light, nonetheless, very easy to note her as a female without looking at her. It’s never hesitant, always punctual and straightforward. There is never a point of second-guessing herself when she speaks. She can be soft and kind, but if she gets angry, her tone can reach borderline terrifying quality that sets anyone back a few yards.

Body Type: Not exactly hourglass-figured, Larissa is very well put together and it’s easy to see she is very confident. She is tall, around six feet tall but it’s hard to tell. Rather thin, she is also strong and it’s easy to tell she has done some heavy lifting in her time. A small waist is usually detailed by what she wears, her face sharply angled with a defined chin and small nose. Her legs are especially long, her fingers long but powerful.

Skin: A medium, sandy-tan, not too dark despite her being outside much of the time.

Hair: A mix of chestnut brown and lighter honey-toned tints, slightly curled and reaching just above her waist, the bangs in a single sweep over the left eye. It’s parted down the middle, and is usually in two low, loose pigtails.

Eyes: Rather large eyes, sharp and usually narrowed in concentration, with long lashes. They’re bright, deep blue, a bit watery, with paler blue flecks here and there.

Common Attire: A light cream-colored buttoned shirt with oversized sleeves and tight buttoned cuffs that keep the sleeves at her wrists and avoid falling over her hands, a light brown close-fitting vest that buttons three down, with a darker brown border and slight fringes along the bottom, and slightly angular collar. Her pants are the same color as the vest, tightly-fitted and easy to move around in, and are tucked into her boots, which come up to just below her knees and are closely-fitted around the ankle, but looser at the top, with rounded toes and a slight heel.

Accessories:

Belts- Larissa wears two belts, one of heavy dark brown leather that’s lined along the top and bottom with bronze links, the other made of brass plating and is ill-fitting, so it slips down one side of her waist.

Armwear- On her left arm are two dull silver bracelets, one linked to the other. On her right arm is a thick leather cuff with silver studs in two parallel rows.

Miscellaneous- She wears a floppy-rimmed hat made of leather and tough cloth, a tanned color with a faded red cloth band around its base.

Personality: Larissa is a very confident person. She never relies on anyone just because they’re bigger or at a higher status than she is. Strong willed and independent, she has made her own way for a while now, and despite being harsh and uncensored, she is rather kind and caring.

Physical Strength: She can lift more than her own weight, but only that up to twenty pounds more, and has quite a bit of lower body strength from pulling carts when needed in the past.

History: Larissa was born and raised on a very small farm. Her family was also a small one, and they owned two acres of land and several horses, an ox, and several goats. The family used the land to grow various crops, and when they sold out after their inability to pay taxes on the land after a horrible drought killed their crops and most of their animals, Larissa broke off from her family and stole a horse, taking to living her life the way she wanted to.

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Old 08-13-2011, 02:16 AM

Alright, get ready for some brainstorming between posts! So, what were your ideas for sidekicks and the like?

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Old 08-13-2011, 02:20 AM

Well that depends. I mean, I've had an idea for a cat-based person, something like a neko but not quite, one who used to be my own character's friend and somehow finds their way to where he now apparently lives with the family. Since the demon is awakened now, its aura has spread despite it being in the body of a doll, and it's brought about a lot of strange happenings that really make up the base and filler of the plotlines themselves.

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Old 08-13-2011, 02:30 AM

Ah, yes that's a good idea! And that would make up for a lot of different things, too... Of course, my character would probably get dragged into strange happenings by being with the doll. I assume our characters will eventually be on good terms, yes?

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Old 08-13-2011, 02:38 AM

Oh, I'm pretty sure the entire family would be involved in everything strange. You know, since it's a family who used to be exorcists that sealed the souls of demons and nonhumans in various artifacts and the like.

Not yet, I should go look for it!


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Found it! But since my character is still asleep, you should begin the thing. No rushing, now! I hate how people tend to do that!

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Old 08-13-2011, 03:25 AM

Done! Sorry that took so long! But I had a friend stop by to drop off an early b-day gift and then I had to think about what I was writing! I hope I left off at a good enough spot for you!

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Old 08-13-2011, 03:27 AM

All right, let me go take a look, right?

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So sorry my reply is short, I had not much to go on without your characters' influence as well.

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Old 08-13-2011, 04:11 AM

It's cool, I just sent my reply back and it's shorter than the first one. I hope that helps give your character more of an opening.

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Old 08-13-2011, 04:33 AM

It's all right, make yours as long or short as you like, depending on the amount of detail you have in the post! I try to put a lot of detail, but when the character is disoriented and dizzy, it's hard to do!

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Old 08-13-2011, 04:46 AM

Oh my goodness, him summoning those hummingbirds was priceless! I'm just having some problems with how I should continue one with the family. I'm having Alexis calm during the whole thing, because though she never heard about the choker, she did know that her family was involved with exorcists.

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Old 08-13-2011, 04:59 AM

Well, perhaps the family could call a conference in the main living room or den, or what you would like to call it, and the Mayao should be there as well, though of course is reluctant to even get near the family. But that is my thought on the subject. I just included an inkling to the name Hughes in Mayao's memory, as well.

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Old 08-13-2011, 05:21 AM

Yes, yes, I think that's where I'm going to be heading with that. And with Alexis having put the choker on the doll, she feels repsonsible for his unhappiness and the form that he's now in.

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Old 08-13-2011, 05:32 AM

I felt Mayao was going a little too hard on Alexis, so I toned it down and made him think about it. It's not her fault he was put in the choker, and despite her curiosity bringing him into the body of a female doll and altering his powers, he takes most of the blame off her and might just blame her family, who intentionally kept his soul around without either destroying the choker or releasing him.

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Old 08-13-2011, 05:49 AM

Ha! I was acutally going to make her side with Mayao during the family meeting! And I didn't mention it, but she's got a bit of an attitude when it comes to her mother. They have clashing personalities, what with her mother being prim and proper and Alexis being... Well, not so much.

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Old 08-13-2011, 06:02 AM

I saw that for her personality in her profile. I figured it would be a bit of a rough clash between personalities. I love the idea, though! Puts them on a bit of friendlier terms.

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Old 08-13-2011, 06:14 AM

And since she sees herself responsible, she see's him as an actual person with feelings, not just a talking doll. So she sort of pits herself against her family that way, by disagreeing with them.

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Old 08-13-2011, 06:44 AM

Well, it should be seen that he is still someone with emotions, despite being in a shell. An appearance is secondary, the person within the shell is the thing that matters.
Also, I thought I would bring out his sarcastic, mean side in my post, just so you know!

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Old 08-13-2011, 06:52 AM

I loved it! I laughed, but tried to do so quielty as not to wake Renee! And I completely agree with him! I'd be mean too! Heads up, her fathers name is Randall, since that was the first thing tha popped into my head, her brother Mark and her mother... Uh, lets see. Jackilyn, I suppose. I wanted something that sounded slightly stuffy, but its funny because its my own mothers name!

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Old 08-13-2011, 06:56 AM

I laughed when I wrote it. Sometimes I surprise myself in how I make something sound, either funny or very mean. Oh, Randall keeps my mind going back to the zombie in Ugly Americans. It's so sad, it is. But if you want a stuffy name...! Where is she... not here, all right. Shelia seems very feminine and stuffy! It's actually Raine's middle name, and she hates it!

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Old 08-13-2011, 07:03 AM

Ha! Shelia! Okay, I think I might use that! I didn't put her name in that last post so I'll use that. I'm so bad when it comes to names. At least you looked out for her! I don't imagine it would have been good if you'd suggested it with her looking over your shoulder!

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Old 08-13-2011, 07:23 AM

All right, I'm glad I can be of help! Although even if the name would have come to me purely of coincidence, I would have gotten a punch to the head. Raine never slaps, the hand is always a fist! I'm pretty sure she would leave a hand-shaped bruise if she slapped every now and then, though!

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Old 08-13-2011, 07:26 AM

She sounds fearsome! And a force to be reckoned with! If need be you can say I thought of the name, she can't hit me from that far away... Can she?

 


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