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12-23-2015, 03:54 PM
i can't think of anything you should do to this avatar to make it any better. leave it! it's perfect!
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Bearzy
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12-24-2015, 07:38 AM
I love this avatar. Don't change a thing.
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Kirin Rosenbaum
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12-25-2015, 04:30 AM
Don't change a thing. It's amazing as is
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Linnea
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12-28-2015, 05:34 AM
i don't think you need to change anything, but i just thought of something. you look like a fancy city lady but outside the window it looks very desolate. not sure if there is any way to urbanize it but i think it would be neat to try
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12-28-2015, 11:40 AM
Don't change a thing I love this avatar  the colors are amazing together.
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Kirin Rosenbaum
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12-29-2015, 01:24 AM
Linnea she's at her mountain chateau.
Baby don't change a thing. It's cute and tells a story to me.
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Bearzy
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12-29-2015, 05:20 AM
Don't change a thing Kirin, at least until after FOWN
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01-01-2016, 03:12 AM
i'd say you pull off the menacing pirate look quite well. no need to change a thing
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Kirin Rosenbaum
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01-01-2016, 04:13 AM
Don't change a thing. She's amazing.
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01-14-2016, 09:35 PM
I think she's awesome! If I *had* to change something, maybe I would add more things to match the dark grey of the ice skates. Otherwise, she's perfect <3
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Bearzy
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01-19-2016, 07:22 AM
If I were to change anything about this avatar, it would be that I would bring the gold from your headband down through the rest of your avatar, at your neck, wrists, belt and ankles.
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01-19-2016, 08:09 AM
Hm. It would be lovely if you could get a little teal or purple on the top of your avatar. But its quite lovely, I'm very interested in her story.
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01-20-2016, 01:26 AM
Thank you for the feedback, Bearzy!
I think Dystopia does not have to change a thing! The avatar overall matches super nicely with the rad skating CI's red, white, and black, and the background with the cityscape is just perfect!
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Kirin Rosenbaum
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01-20-2016, 04:56 AM
I agree with bringing more gold into your avatar. Maybe the tribal anklets for the gold in the bottom part?
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01-21-2016, 01:39 AM
(I created a new avatar so just posting here in case anyone wants to critique this new one. Thank you!) ^_^
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Bearzy
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01-21-2016, 02:55 AM
I'm not sure that the blue you've got in the background matches very well. I would use perhaps more of the grass green, or a darker shade and something to frame it on the other side if you're going for a portal effect
And I'll do kirin as well, don't change a thing. You're still looking as fab as ever in that avatar, I think it's one of your best so far.
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01-21-2016, 03:09 AM
Thank you for the feedback, Bearzy! I am trying to figure out what background would be best to replace this one with, but I am not sure which one yet, and I also want to keep the avatar bright and not use another grey
For Bearzy's avatar, I would maybe suggest to put on some orange shoes because there are snippets of orange in her hairpin, the bow on her chest, and the hint of orange near her bellybutton, but not anywhere that is lower than that
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01-24-2016, 10:37 PM
I love avatars with multiple colors. You did a good job in trying to balance all of them. However, because its a difficult task, there's always one or two colors that are slightly off. I think you're trying to balance too many maybe. The gold isn't really standing out much and can't reach the feet area.
I feel like the pinks on the candy and the shoes are lighter than the bunny and middle pinks. or maybe it's just my eyes playing tricks. Overall, nice job. :)
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01-24-2016, 10:53 PM
I love your blend of modern and ancient styles with your striped socks and sunglasses, but your avatar seems a little non expressive, and could do with some story. Perhaps a background and a handheld item would make it feel more themed.
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01-25-2016, 01:28 AM
Thank you for the feedback, Ignis! I think you're right about the shades of pink not all being identical.
I would not change a thing about Bearzy's avatar. I love how black, white, and grey shades were all used to make the entire avatar look like one of those film negatives! She looks so peaceful with her eyes closed in the rain, too.
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Kirin Rosenbaum
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01-30-2016, 01:11 PM
Don't change a thing. Your avatar is so cute.
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01-30-2016, 04:00 PM
Don't change anything, still liking your winter-y avatar!
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01-30-2016, 04:06 PM
I love the avatar except maybe add some shoes is all :)
EDIT: maybe some black shoes to balance out the black from your hair, or in a shade of pink that has already been used in your avatar is my suggestion :)
Last edited by salvete; 01-30-2016 at 04:52 PM..
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01-30-2016, 04:50 PM
i really like the overall feel i get from your avatar, sal. it's like one of those japanese paper houses with a polar bear visitor from the north lol i do think it looks a little incomplete but not sure what would make it more complete while not making it look cluttered... hmmm... maybe something else out the window?
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Bearzy
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01-30-2016, 08:53 PM
I wouldn't change a thing Linny. You look wonderful
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