ooooh yus ^.^

but then it would need maroon accents as well.

haha yeah - I like the maroon but it would need it in other places to tie it in...maybe I'll try buttons...

Buttons would be fun, your getting better at them xP

hahahaha buttons are my nemesis XD

Alrighty - what do you think?

OMG......:drool:

This is the first item of yours that I am already planning outfits in my head lols.

lol!!! I hope I can get this done! I think this would be awesome to wear!

I hope others come in here and give me critique so I can get it to where it will be releaseable :D

I'm trying to think of good critiques, but others are better at such things xP

lol I'm good at critiquing other people's works but then i have blinders on when it comes to mine XD

I am better at critiquing others work. Better then at mine o.0

haha I think it's hard for everyone to see the problems with their work - I love when people give me pointers :D

I'm the same way, I love pointers....but I've been afraid to give pointers to the rest of the people....afraid they would get offended....because some people do.

I posted a little crit on the last page ;u;

Originally Posted by Rainbows

The 'inlines' (the outlines within the clothing) are way too dark! oxo
I like the shape, except for our lefthand side, the edge on the torso - it looks like it's pinned in place (unnatural).

OMG I didn't see this I'm sorry D:

I agree about the torso - I'll expand it one pixel and see how it looks that way.

I was using the second darkest shade for the inlines - should I go to the third darkest shade?

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Originally Posted by Cora Lorington

I'm the same way, I love pointers....but I've been afraid to give pointers to the rest of the people....afraid they would get offended....because some people do.

SOmetimes it's a blow to my ego when I make something I love and people are like "This is wrong, this is wrong, change this, that's ugly, that's wrong, aaaand this" btu I know it's to help me improve so I never say anything but thank you and go to change the item (or totally ditch it if it's that bad) :D XD

Originally Posted by Rainbows

I posted a little crit on the last page ;u;

Sorry I missed it - I just posted a reply!

yeah.....I can understand the blow to the ego thing. Not much with the pixel thing, cause well....I haven't been doing it long. I KNOW I'm still new and need help. But I get that way with my art.

Tried fixing the left side torso there and then also worked on some of the shading a bit...


@Cora - I haven't been doing it for too long either - we can grow together :D

That would be fun ^.^

Most definitely! I hope we can all fill the shops up with awesome items :D

Right now I hope just one thing makes it there of mine. I would feel accomplished and then set my sights higher ^.^

Although, I think my blue shirt has potential. Thanks to you and Xurette.

I can definitely see your blue shirt in there! Work on the sash/belt thing a bit more...and add some sleeves - and then maybe submit and see what jelly thinks?

It does have sleeves. I just need to work with a sleeves a bit more. And the belt. *nodds*

I have submitted it but I keep changing the link as I update.

lol that works! Hopefully Jelly will see the best version when she stops by here :D XD

I'd like to know what she thinks, but I'm also afraid she'll hate it T.T

haha - she's told me that she didn't like some of my designs flat out before XD I just went "Okay" and just trashed it XD

I think she will like your top though :D

on a random note. Did she add a couple colors on the shorts after the initial release? Or did I just miss them.

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@Convo- I hope she doesn't do that. Then I might cry T.T

haha yeah she did - lemon ice and mango were not there originally XDD

and no - the ones she did that to me with were me streching designs and stuff and it just didn't work. Yours is a nice basic and cute shirt - i think she will enjoy it :D