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#1151
Old 06-16-2013, 08:09 AM

okay well how about this one?


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#1152
Old 06-16-2013, 11:32 AM

Hi! I'm back from a couple year hiatus, so my avatar making skills are rusty (not that they were that excellent to begin with). Could you maybe give me a rating on my avvie here? It looks off somehow and I'm not quite sure how to fix it...



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#1153
Old 06-16-2013, 05:22 PM

*falls over and yawns*

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#1154
Old 06-17-2013, 04:29 PM

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okay well how about this one?

well i like it a lot. you look like the evil step mom in snow white. to get that effect a little more i would use the crow shoulder feathers instead of the coal shoulder fluff. i would also just the goddess shoes, just to balance out the gold.

9/10

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Hi! I'm back from a couple year hiatus, so my avatar making skills are rusty (not that they were that excellent to begin with). Could you maybe give me a rating on my avvie here? It looks off somehow and I'm not quite sure how to fix it...



Thanks in advance
welcome back!

i like the pearl items. i wish there was some pearl item for your head... but i know there isnt, can you make your hair that colour? also the flowers are nice on the head, but they add yellow which is no where else in your avatar. i would remove them and replace them with just a red hairpin. there are lots to choose from. other then that its practically perfect! love the layering and the items used.

8/10

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#1155
Old 06-17-2013, 05:51 PM

Okay I'll work on that one next after my entry avi 'nods'

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#1156
Old 06-17-2013, 05:57 PM

alright. you look like a frozen princess right now. so pretty.

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#1157
Old 06-17-2013, 07:42 PM

haha thanks.. My contest goal is to do something int he 'Freeze' Category so yeah.

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#1158
Old 06-17-2013, 08:58 PM

oh yeah. i should make a note on the front page..i shouldnt be rating any avatars for people who are participating in Project mene. it wouldnt be fair. i will give advice, but no rating.

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#1159
Old 06-17-2013, 09:05 PM

Hello loves

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#1160
Old 06-17-2013, 10:50 PM

hey sam!

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#1161
Old 06-17-2013, 11:01 PM

*wanders in and looks around*

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#1162
Old 06-18-2013, 12:13 AM

Bsw I miss you ^_^ how are you?

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#1163
Old 06-18-2013, 01:09 AM

I would love some advice on my current avatar please~


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#1164
Old 06-18-2013, 03:33 AM

star managed to get hte Crawford wrap, sheh as to get hte gold fo rhte goddess shoes 'nods'

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#1165
Old 06-18-2013, 08:52 AM

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Bsw I miss you ^_^ how are you?
not so good right now. my boyfriend has strep throat and my nonna is dying... other then that ok though. how are you?

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star managed to get hte Crawford wrap, sheh as to get hte gold fo rhte goddess shoes 'nods'
yeah i love it now. its perfect.

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I would love some advice on my current avatar please~

very Cheshire cat. except a black and white version instead of a pink and purple one. im not exactly sure why i think Cheshire cat... i just do. and i love that. i think it is the inside outside look of the background layering. anyways i love it, as it is, the only thing i might change is the smile. I would make it the big creepy smile. and maybe, maybe, if you have it already, change the shorts to the tengu black shorts. they are puffier and have checkers on them.

10/10

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#1166
Old 06-18-2013, 11:16 AM

I'll change the smile, but sadly I do not have the tengu CI Thanks though BSW~ I always love getting advice and critique from you since you're like, one of the best avatar makers on this site

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#1167
Old 06-18-2013, 11:55 AM

haha thanks BSW

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#1168
Old 06-18-2013, 03:44 PM

Everything is okay on this side I just might be getting sick

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#1169
Old 06-18-2013, 03:57 PM

aww that sucks.. star's dealing with pain in her right leg, which has her worried because it might mean im getting another infection in that leg and i just, JUST got rid of one wound.

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#1170
Old 06-18-2013, 06:35 PM

*creeps into thread*

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#1171
Old 06-18-2013, 07:10 PM

'pounces' hey kirin what's up

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#1172
Old 06-18-2013, 07:28 PM

Ohai people~

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#1173
Old 06-18-2013, 08:20 PM

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I'll change the smile, but sadly I do not have the tengu CI Thanks though BSW~ I always love getting advice and critique from you since you're like, one of the best avatar makers on this site
aww thanks and your welcome. its always a pleasure when people appreciate a good critique.

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Everything is okay on this side I just might be getting sick
yeah i hear yeah. my boyfriend is so freaken sick right now... its crazy that im not. honestly... dont know how im managing this one, but i count my stars lucky.. and i eat more fruit and drink more water. lol.

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aww that sucks.. star's dealing with pain in her right leg, which has her worried because it might mean im getting another infection in that leg and i just, JUST got rid of one wound.
oh god that sounds awful. i have no words.

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#1174
Old 06-18-2013, 09:54 PM

I have a cold.

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#1175
Old 06-18-2013, 09:56 PM

aww fun 'nods'

 


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