thanking for singing kirin!
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Originally Posted by Ashtyn Leigh

I would like to know your opinion on this avatar, also if I need to add or delete an item ^-^
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the greens are all wrong. none of them match. that bothers me a lot. the green is mint in the skirt. there are mint lolita shoes that would match a lot better then the cutie ones you have on now. you hair is too bright, needs to be softer.
the blues are all wrong as well. the leg ribbons are snowy, the hairpin is winter and snowy and the skirt is turquoise.
the pinks match pretty damn will though. the corset seems off, but its close enough to not notice significantly with everything else so off.
i like the flow of the avatar though. so here is what i would do.
1. change the shoes to the mint lolita shoes
2. fix the hair
3. get rid of the leg ribbons and add the blue and black ankle wings from the messenger ci
4. add a turquoises shirt that layered well with everything else.
5. add something turquoise to the head like the crown or the blue handkerchief
its a great start though, just needs some touches here and there to even out the rough edges.