Yeah, Dancer's is super pretty! And I luuuuved the Taehyun section of Haejung's inner monologue.

Haha. Only if you want them to. Mihi's is Liza's actual first post with the format she made.

@Pearl: xD I told you it was going to be epic.

I think this will be fun. Okay, I don't know if I can make mine fancy yet, but I can make it a pretty color. *chooses some sorta blue*

@Dancer
Epic? The length alone is epic. *feels so untalented* I seriously adored it though.

Okay, I added to the post I sent you originally for the example, Dancer. It's much longer now. My poor character also forgot an umbrella >_< lol

edit: I have to say, I think this rp is really going to help my writing skills ^^

Fuyumi~ D:
Part of your post is waaayyyy to similar to Mihi's. D:

eih, I'll correct it. Then bed *looks at clock*

okay lets see... How to make it more unique.... Oh okay I'll make it so she brings a jacket so she doesn't get wet ^^...as much

edit:

Okay I corrected the parts that were similar. I'm not going to correct the beginning part though, because I wrote that before I ever saw Mihi's and I'm too lazy to correct her morning routine..don't most people wake up the same way anyways? T_T I'll rewrite it if you really want me too. But tomorrow. ^^ Good night, sweet dreams. I'm tired... Oo, should I perhaps change how she arrives? Maybe give her a bike, or ....hmm.. maybe have her take the bus? But would the bus be running in such weather..but she walked to school, so would it make sense to do such a thing? Okay, I need to stop thinking and go to bed.

Originally Posted by fuyumi_saito

eih, I'll correct it. Then bed *looks at clock*

okay lets see... How to make it more unique.... Oh okay I'll make it so she brings a jacket so she doesn't get wet ^^...as much

Oh and to your edit: I wasn't as much worried about the beginning more the way she reacted to the rain.

Also as someone pointed out to me:

"That Soyeon chick totally just threw a monster donkey dong into our chronology by having her arrive late in the day. It's supposed to be morning that everyone arrives.
She won't be able to join until laaaater, and therefore won't know ANYTHING that's gone on. That also puts her at a disadvantage for character development; unless she goes to school at night and doesn't sleep?"

...well .that's really...nice of them to say.. *Goes in a corner and cries* okay she won't go to school then. I will change it again. I'm sorry for being so horrible.

Yeah. He seems like a prick, but he made a valid argument. Sorry. <3

....Right. I corrected it. it's much shorter now, but dude, I got class in the morning, and it's 1:30. So I'm sorry I suck. but if you want me out of the rp because I'm an idiot, then I will leave T_T' *sighs* but I'll check back when I wake up so I can make any further corrections if need be.

well..what I'm trying to say, is that I really don't wanna ruin anyone else time because of my annoying mistakes. *feels really horrible and just wants to sleep* well I can always pull an all nighter..

Also, I want to point out the fact that someone can go to school at night and still go to sleep. I know plenty of people that do it. Plus, she can easily pull off going to school, part time job(perhaps working on days off from school) and stuff.

*blinks and laughs* beans...? Maybe coffee beans? *smiles slightly* I really need to force myself to go to bed. I'm too tired to use proper grammer. I should have just waited till tomorrow to do this.

Soy beans... xD

Soy beeeeeeaaaaans.

New rule up.

I want to be the law! *makes self a deputy* ^_^ Have I met Cohedros? I think I have. Not sure but I think... Hello there in case I have not!

First of all, let me get the obvious facts out of the way:

I am elitist, preferist, and a grammar nazi. I enjoy comma rules and edit the punctuation of popular novels for fun. I like to make fun of those without a decent grasp of the English grammatical and syntax systems. That being said, bite me.

Ceal, my apologies, but I do not think you are quite advanced enough with your grammatical skills to join the ranks of the rest of us smartfolk.

Please don't take this the wrong way, but you wouldn't know the proper use of a comma if it bit you in the ass with razor edged teeth. In fact, I don't think you'd figure out apostrophes, either. Capitalization rules are beyond you, and run-on sentences are your forte. You also don't seem to have any kind of decent spelling abilities whatsoever.

You play a flat character, my friend. I have seen that particular one a million times before in my 10+ years of roleplay experience, and to be totally honest, I don't think you put forth any effort at all. But truthfully, it is none of these things that irk me the most. What aggravates me to no end is the fact that you deny the rest of us the ability to draw our separate conclusions about your character by the use of a vague, ambiguous biography and staid personality. It seems to me that you didn't put forth the minimum required amount of effort required.

So, as I see it, you can either put a looooot more effort into your posts, or you can do the nice thing for the rest of our brains, which slowly turn into mush at a slightly faster pace with each post you write, and quit.

No, you haven't, but hi. I'm really not as bad as you think I am right now. Reaaaally great timing on that last post @_@

Well at least now I REALLY know you are the law. *hides*

Yeah. We've got the good cop/bad cop thing going on. xD
And Faiyth.. She..

is just awesome, literate, and lives in my cul-de-sac. xD

:( I'm not a bad person. I'm just very direct and...okay, yeah. A little bitchy. But I think Faiyth and Dancer balance me out.

I'm actually a really nice person about all things non-RP based, I promise, and as unlikely as it seems.

I'll just be over here... Hiding behind Dancer with my nonexistent skillz.

Well, I'm going to bed. I have to be up by 5am Central. e__e;

Work 7-1PM. I usually can post from there.
xD

I won't roast anyone unless there is dire need to do so.

And there was dire need.

Gah. I'm off tomorrow except for school. Night, Dancer. My posts will be up in a bit. I'm sure Cohedros will beat me with a phone book in your stead if there's a need.

Imma be the happy median between good and bad cop. XD Anyways, it's really early here, and I have school. So imma head off. I'll check back later today. :]

Nooooo. The prospect of my terrible writing scares everyone away! T_T