MoodyBats
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02-20-2011, 11:53 PM
maybe add a belt or something to the hair and something around the neck and shoulders or something else to add to the outfit to match the background or loose the background. but it is a cute avatar
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Bearzy
dusting off the cobwebs
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02-21-2011, 01:50 AM
Hmm, I think this one is almost there, but there's something missing. Maybe a handheld?
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Chickie Nuggs
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02-21-2011, 01:51 AM
This avi could use some red at the hands or at the waist.
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chronic_heartbreak14
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02-21-2011, 03:01 AM
more atlantis by the feet, i have no idea how you're going to do that!
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Bearzy
dusting off the cobwebs
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02-21-2011, 06:43 AM
You show far too much upper thigh young lady! Cover yourself! (with a teenie skirt maybe?)
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redrabbit
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02-21-2011, 08:13 AM
I don't know about the watch/wrench combo, perhaps some other items could help balance them out?
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sweet_serender159
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02-21-2011, 10:03 AM
hmmmm dont change it I think
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Black Phoebe
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02-21-2011, 01:30 PM
Loose the scarf I think, it adds a bit too much to the look, plus you should show a bit more skin to balance out what we can already see compared to what is covered
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Roka
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02-21-2011, 06:51 PM
Maybe use the silver cage without a heart in it? :sweat:
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Enzeru
Her Ladyship
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02-21-2011, 11:32 PM
cute! I'd like to see a handheld of some kind.
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Chickie Nuggs
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02-22-2011, 01:42 AM
I think you should replace the black poof balls with the white ones.
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Bearzy
dusting off the cobwebs
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02-22-2011, 03:21 AM
I still say you want a necklace... There's just a gap there...
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Roka
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02-22-2011, 03:44 AM
Get rid of those wings.
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monstahh`
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02-22-2011, 05:37 AM
Add the white domino mask?
xDD /loves those masks.
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chronic_heartbreak14
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02-22-2011, 06:22 AM
it looks fabulous, i would say leave it but maybe a touch more white or a lighter purple bow on the head
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sweet_serender159
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02-22-2011, 06:24 AM
I still think you should add a tad more silver :)
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Roka
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02-22-2011, 07:48 AM
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Originally Posted by monstahh`
Add the white domino mask?
xDD /loves those masks.
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White domino mask? What are those?
TBE for Sweet.
Mm. I'd say take out the huge chunk of blue at the bottom and get something less... chunkier.
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Bearzy
dusting off the cobwebs
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02-22-2011, 07:58 AM
Move a belt to a little higher, I say. You have two blocks of white, and only a small amount of heaps of colours in between.
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greendragon06
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02-22-2011, 10:17 AM
Your outfit looks great Carzee. Do you have any backdrops though? Those are nice.
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Enzeru
Her Ladyship
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02-22-2011, 05:44 PM
You're so mixed matched I don't know where to start. Perhaps remove the mask.
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sweet_serender159
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02-22-2011, 09:08 PM
I recon, if anything maybe try adding a tad more black?
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chronic_heartbreak14
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02-23-2011, 12:27 AM
remove the eye covering and give yourself a dark blue headband :) i would LOVE to see your eyes :D and i think it'll make her look cuter
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Bearzy
dusting off the cobwebs
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02-23-2011, 02:32 AM
I just noticed something. You have white shoes. Odd... Why white? They don't match. You should have silver.
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Roka
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02-23-2011, 02:46 AM
A little more black around the waist to balance out the head and feet would do nicely.
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Murasaki Fujiwara
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02-24-2011, 03:42 PM
I love it, but the shoes seem a it out of place in my opinion. Maybe find something blue to tie them in? Other than that, keep it up!
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