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Old 07-25-2008, 04:49 AM

Oi Kiami, some of the beats are a bit off?

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Old 07-25-2008, 04:49 AM

I thought some of the lines could be inverted?

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Old 07-25-2008, 04:50 AM

I don't know? It's been a while.. xD The poem itself is nice though! <33

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Old 07-25-2008, 04:51 AM

Thanks, I never was good at English class
xD
If they can't I hope she'll let me re-do it
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It was so hard to come up with a turn for the third stanza
I didn't know if that was a requirement, but all of Shakey's had them

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Old 07-25-2008, 05:01 AM

xD Well I did well in english, and took a Shakespeare class... *sweat drop*

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Old 07-25-2008, 05:21 AM

Oh, I took the advanced class and everything
And we did alot of Shakey stuff
I'm just not any good with it
She hated me
xD
But the grade was my fault. I'm just a math-science person

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Old 07-25-2008, 05:34 AM

I'm not very good at Math.. English and History was always my thing, but I usually did well in Science too actually.

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Old 07-25-2008, 05:37 AM

I'm glad I don't have to take many language courses anymore. I'm going into chemical engineering, so no room for other classes
xD
So this may be the last poem I ever write
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Ok, so I'll get bored and do one someday
xD

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Old 07-25-2008, 05:40 AM

xD Well I am trying to get a job as a writer... lol

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Old 07-25-2008, 05:43 AM

What kind?
Books? Magazines?
I don't know much about that type of job, so I'm a bit curious as to what you all actually do other than the writing part
x3
Like the type of research and such

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Old 07-25-2008, 05:55 AM

I'm working on a book right now actually. Though I put in a portfolio for a site.

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Old 07-25-2008, 05:58 AM

That's cool! What kind of book? Fantasy? Biography?
Sorry if I'm getting nosy!

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#38
Old 07-25-2008, 06:22 AM

I'll see if I can come up with things. The problem is that I tend to be inspired by life/death/society than by things like summer...

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Old 07-25-2008, 07:54 AM

Ooh I think I will have to have a go at this, I haven't written anything in a long while though but its worth a shot!

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#40
Old 07-25-2008, 10:10 AM

-scrambles-

Forgive me for disappearing. D:

I thought your poem was really nice, Kiami!
I think the syllable count in a few of the lines is off though... >.>;

Last edited by `Kitami; 07-25-2008 at 10:22 AM..

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Old 07-25-2008, 10:55 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Kiami View Post
So, slant rhyme is ok?

Slant rhyme is okay~ ;]

And for your entry, it's definitely fine. you don't have to like... rhyme everything like a normal English sonnet. That gets boring after awhile~ :sweat:

Kiami, if you need to change anything, just post another application form. I'll just use your latest one that you post~ ^^

@bar: wOOt!! first post!! <333
you should deserve something~ ;]

@cutie: aw... even with no literature sense... if you get my attention, then you get my fave price nee~ isn't that worth a try?8D

@Knerd: ouh! do enter!!! i'll wait for your application!! XD

@alexander: do write a sonnet!!
I have to write those in highschool too, not that I'm that good on it. but I'm passe.

@uzura: I'll wait for you form darling~ <3 love your sig~

@raze: SILLY RAZE!!! enter or die!! D<

@Yreka: you could set a scene in summer night, but about life. use the summer night to symbolize your view on different things. it doesn't really have to be about the summer itself~ ^^

@woop: <3 hello love~
do try and write a sonnet~ it should be a very fun experience!!

@kita: thank you for being around!!
I have a hectic time atm. I'm staying at a hotel near my house with my aunties and cousins. it's a 5 star hotel~ *0* very great. must have fun for awhile. I'll check on every page anyways, so it's alright na~

tell apo about judging and see if you will have time. I'll chat with you about the details. if apo cannot make it, I can get s_m to do it too. she is interested in judging. I think around 3 judges are enough. if something come up, maybe some others would do too~

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Old 07-25-2008, 11:11 AM

Saddie way to go on planning a cool threadie!

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Old 07-25-2008, 11:19 AM


thank you woop~ ^-^
I'm very happy that it came out alright~ XD;

I'm not at home now. but I'll update stuff and come back to check on it~

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#44
Old 07-25-2008, 03:52 PM

*rolls in*

Hello, sasa. =D

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#45
Old 07-25-2008, 04:18 PM

Hello iro~ ^-^
still around? XDDDDDDDD

alright~

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#46
Old 07-25-2008, 04:33 PM

Yeah, yeah. Still around. xD

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#47
Old 07-25-2008, 05:04 PM

@ n@ I totally remember learning about this in school.
It looks like fun. I would definitely try to enter if I was a poet. XD

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#48
Old 07-25-2008, 09:01 PM

Right now I have...eight lines written.

I'm having a lot more fun with this than I thought I would. When I used to write poetry, it was just awful. But carefully planning the iambic pentameter and coming up with the perfect rhymes and vocabulary is more of a brain exercise than anything else. It's a neat little puzzle.

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#49
Old 07-26-2008, 04:45 AM

I had to write one for English class, and it's about me being excited that it's June and almost summertime. Could I enter it? It sorta fits with the theme...[Plus I'm too lazy to write another one.]
:sweat: Please?

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Old 07-26-2008, 05:33 AM

Oh gosh! This is so fun! For english class my senior year we had to write sonnets! It sounds hard, but the hardest part is coming up with adequate rhymes.
At least in my opinion.
Though I know I won't win probably, I see no harm whatsoever in at least submitting an entry.
I've meant to expand my poetry more anyway.

 


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