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Old 11-09-2007, 06:27 AM

Just something I did for class. I got 10/10 for some reason but it's the only poem in my life I've ever done.

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So the voice in my head
says “It’s just like before.â€

And the voice in my head
says “Don’t open the door.â€

But my heart says “Go on.
He’s waiting for you.â€

“This time he’s changed.
It’s like he’s brand new.â€

My body disagrees.
“He’ll do it again.â€

It recoiles with fear.
“It’s just a matter of when.â€

“The heart is all wrong.â€
My soul wisely sings.

I fly far away,
with my new set of wings.

iViolent
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Old 12-07-2007, 11:38 PM


It is very good.
It also has a nice, clear theme.

 


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