Cardcaptor Sakura

The wind is whipping
I am jumping
Aiming for the creature
With an attack following suit

I am armed with my Clow cards and staff
My weapons of choice
I do my job carefully
Ready, Aim, and SHOOT

To save the world from destruction
And to save those around me
Keeping all my loved ones
From the darkest despair

I run all around
Fighting Clow Cards with the ones I already have
And with Tomoyo’s costumes
I add a bit of flair

To save the word from devastation
And that’s what I am truly after
I’m Sakura Kinomoto
And I’m a Cardcaptor

Did it for english. Bad/Good/Horrible/Wonderful? Something?

Sounds really good... though if you'd like it critiqued it's in white below ^^" (just in case you don't)

I like the part about Tomoyo's costumes, describes them well XD

Good anime, great poem ^_^

Most of it flowed really well except "Fighting Clow Cards with the ones I already have" came off as too long, like a run on sentence type line. Hope that helps =)

Cute:heart:

Thank you for finally posting. I was getting a little scared that it epic failed.

Don't worry about posting... My thread never gets posts but has loads of views... Just a slow post-less forum I guess...

It's a very slow forum for posting and critique etc. ^^;; Just how the poetry section is.

BTW, I :heart: cardcaptors. I named my daughter Sakura. >.>