Aero
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10-09-2007, 04:22 AM
- Yeahh. I'll just be posting some random poetry here. Sometimes I just feel like making some. ^^
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Aero
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10-09-2007, 04:36 AM
I am breaking through my skin
The thoughts inside me growing thin
I try to make my thoughts run clear
But in my thoughts, I'm growing fear
I think and think and think too long
I even try to hear a song
I don't know why, my thoughts are long
I think, I why?, I smear, I cry, just wondering what is it that I be
Now sitting here, in a corner of a street, I'm just sitting here, trying to see
I see people walk by, wondering what I'm doing
And then I see a little boy just sitting there and booing
I realized that I had just been staring at the mirror
For I am a failure indeed, who I am is getting clearer
I am sorry me friend, I got out of hand, please forgive me, won't you?
Because I was going crazy, yes I was, will you forgive me too?
I made this poem in enlightment of my dear friend
Just because I was that stupid, I don't want our friendship to end
....................Aero
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Aero
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10-09-2007, 05:14 AM
- This is a poem
A very short one indeed
Isn't it like, great?!
<3
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zumbie
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10-09-2007, 05:31 AM
Very pretty!
I admire when someone can write cause I stink at it XD
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Aero
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10-09-2007, 05:33 AM
- Thankss....xDD
I didn't really try to make them have any rhythm..D:
Which is poetry. xDD
But they took forever to rhyme and make sense? D: xD
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Aero
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10-10-2007, 01:50 AM
- I can only tell you once, but I can not tell you why
But when you are done reading this, I am going to die.
It's not because of you and, and it's not because of me.
It's all because the memories that we, could never be.
I tried to bribe your love for me, as I was desperate
But now I know what I have found, your love, I could never get.
It's not your fault you don't love me, it's not my fault either.
We obviously weren't meant to be, without me, you're just cleaner.
So don't worry about me, you only witnessed this
It doesn't mean it's all your fault just trust me, give me a kiss!
I can only tell you once, but I can not tell you why
Even though my heart just stopped, good bye my love, goodbye.
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Dystopia
Bitter-Bitter
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10-10-2007, 03:03 AM
Beautiful.
This is amazing. First Shaggy, now you. xD
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Aero
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10-10-2007, 09:43 AM
- Thank you Anna luff. <3
Shaggy = Poem writer?! o_o
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`realiize
Dead Account Holder
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10-11-2007, 04:44 AM
Awh, I like them. =3
They're intense >___<;
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Aero
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10-11-2007, 07:26 AM
- Thank youu. xDD
Intense? Care to elaborate? xD
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`realiize
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10-11-2007, 07:40 AM
xD Intense byy, it sounds like you're in love -teases-
=3
Hahaha, but I don't know, it's very different from other poetry, and it takes you through a in depth look behind the person.
I really like the second one though. I can really put myself in that frame of mind.
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Aero
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10-11-2007, 07:42 AM
- xDD Nahh. :P I'm good at making love-like-friend-like-love poems. xD
Haha, cool? x3
You mean the haiku or the second big one? xDD That rhymes? x3
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Aero
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10-13-2007, 02:03 AM
- I sit and tear and run with fear about this coming day.
I kick and shank and want to sheer the horrors so I pray.
I try to make all of the time past while I play some games.
I even try to jump and fly while killing myself, I hide in shame.
The next day when I woke up I figured out, the stupidest mistake ever.
That the day had run by 23 days ago and I was stuck so very clever.
LOL. Boredom..xD
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Aero
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10-15-2007, 07:51 AM
There once was a girl named sue.
She wanted to find her shoe.
So she looked all around,
There, here, up and down,
And ends up not having a clue.
xD
I forgot what these kinds of poems are called.
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Aero
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10-15-2007, 07:59 AM
- Here's a poem I made awhile ago. VERY long ago. Well last year. Hmph. xDD <3 Well hope you enjoy, like I said, love/hate/breakup anything to do with love is the easiest poems for me. ^^
Do you know I loved you?
Did you know I loved you?
Until that very first day.
When I suddenly came to you...
Although, you pushed me away.
I thought what we had between us,
Was the best that could've even been had.
But when you pushed me away that day,
You just made me sad.
You really are a two-faced slut.
Although you've made me smile.
But not that you have pushed me away that day,
My thoughts for you turned mild.
Don't know what I'm talking about?
Yes, you must me dumb.
Well I don't feel like shouting now,
But my heart's very numb.
Even though my heart is numb,
It kills me to have to say,
That my heart's aching badly now,
And it's never been my way.
Well I don't give a _______ for you,
It's something you don't deserve.
Although my feelings for you now,
Is hating to turn around and curve.
Well, Did you know I loved you?
Until that very first day.
When I suddenly came to you...
Although you pushed me away.
WHAT DO YOU THINK? It's my best poem I've ever done, it's a lyric poem. ^^
Excuse the slut part. XD
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Aero
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12-19-2007, 02:29 AM
ANOTHER. 8D On the spot by the way. xP
New version of twas the night before christmas.
TITLE: Twas the night before Christmas
BY: Aero
Twas the night before Christmas, lie a naked young boy.
Did not have a family, so no love and no joy.
Tears were unexistent, no such thing could be.
As he had not enough water to let it go free.
He met a young girl, nearly his age she was.
She said hi to him, but he can't speak because,
He had no education, no life to speak for.
No words, no numbers, his papers he tore.
Christmas Eve it was, she had an extra gift.
She bought for herself, and gave him a lift.
Time for us to go! Her mom said to her.
She said her goodbyes, and left leaving fur.
He saw what she left, and what a profit he could make.
But she helped him and all, so he went to the lake.
That's where they were heading, he saw the car go.
So he took the fur coat, and went down the road.
She stood there at the lake, shivering in the cold.
Watching fireworks blow, simmering to the crows.
He walked over to her, and handed her her jacket.
He had nothing to say, so walked back to his rackets.
He went to sleep with a smile, as he did a good deed.
When he could have just sold it for profits, indeed.
When he was still sleeping, Santa dropped him a gift.
The gift of a family, a gift of a lift.
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Lsaylor
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12-19-2007, 05:01 AM
o.o;
Lacy loves your poems.
;-;
lovelovelove them.
Good job on that last one.
-Claps- ^^<33
Lacy is bookmarking this..
nice to see you again Aero Btw..
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fuyumi_saito
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01-04-2008, 10:01 PM
wonderful stuff you got here ^^ I really like it. Some rhyming ones, some not rhyming ones. Very good ^^
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Aero
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02-09-2008, 11:26 AM
Thank you. ^.^ <3
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