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Old 10-13-2007, 10:14 PM

The boy looked at the roads Aghast;
For the three roads that apeared were vast.
His compainion stood him
As they looked upon the roads in front of them.

They first looked upon the road on the right
Which displayed a very bright light.

It reminded them of hapiness and joy,
Like a child feels when he gets a new toy.

Then they looked upon the left.

The left reminded them darkness,
And it was drawing them in like a dark harness.

Shadows flew around in motions,
as if it was a great black ocean.

Tears Poured down his eyes,
But he used his hood to hide his feeling of demise.

The third Road was the most strange of all.
It reminded the boy much of fall.

It's mystrious Aura was very much pondered.

Without a second thought, the boys went for the one road.

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Old 10-17-2007, 07:58 PM

I like it alot, but ya kinda left me hangin there. no offense. But its still very good.

 


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