lizyy was surprsied when he grabbed her. she was about to push him off when she saw her ship exploded. "what the hell" lizzy said as she ship sank. she saw her father run up with the supplies then saw the ship sinking.

[sorry gtg'

"i saw a crew men drop the barrel.......it was gonna land on the ammo.....i had to get you off lizz......you would have died"

Rin was walking around, she wasn't much of a people person. She didn't trust anyone. Rin thought of something, she was only wearing a bikini top and some really really really short shorts under her jacket, and men loved to walk up to a beautiful woman who was wearing something skimpy. She opened her jacket and started walking around, a few men started to stare at her. SHe giggle softly and whispered "Suckers.". A few men walked up yo her and started hitting on her, after a few minutes of talking to the men they decided to become a crew member, and all it took was for Rin to open her jacket and reveal her skimpy clothing and seduce the men into joining the crew. 'Damn I must be hot to be able to get like therty men into joining the crew all in one day!' she thought to herself.

"il pay for the damages.....or if u want you can travel with me"

Rin walked to JollyR and said "Look what I've found!". She pointed to a huge group of men and said "Their are new ship mates!". Rin closed zipped up her jacket and said "Men are suckers for women who wear skimpy clothing!".

"i aint no exception remember that First mate Rin"

Rin sighed and said "So are they part of the crew or not? If their not then I'll just blow them up with my canon....That sounds fun....Don't let them join! I want to blow someone up now!".

"5 of them cant tehre to fat but the rest can"

Rin nodded and said "Every guy standing over their can go to the ship, except for the fat ones!". The fat guy stayed while the other guys left, Rin pulled out her canon and shot the fat guys.

"happy?now get the ship ready"looks at lizzy"are you coming with or not?"

Rin nodded and walked to the ship, when she was at the ship the guys were walking around the ship looking at stuff. Rin got on the ship and yelled "PREPARE THE SHIP!!". The guys nodded and started preparing the ship. Rin sat on the railing and watched the guys work.

[now we wait]

[just got home. i wont post that much till im done iwth my remidiation on my jedi. gosh i hate the bench mark i did terrible on english.]

lizzy looked at her dad who was helping men out of the water who had surrvived. only 5 had. "fine only if my dad and the other five can join.

"deal welcom abored the intersceptor"

lizzy helped her father and the men aboard. she smiled as the wind blew and she let it blow through her red hair.

lifts the anchor then yells at the men to drop the sails and sails off of tortuega

lizzy stood by her father as they watch tortuga sail out of sight.

The guys dropped the sails. Rin stared at the sea.

we sail off and meet a East Austrailia trading co. ship"what should we do rin?shall we raid there ship or send there ship to the bottem of the seas"

Rin smiled and said "We shall let them be, if they try anything we'll blow 'em up.".

lizzy and her father decided to do some sword practice. every movement she made was swift. she beat her father most of the times.

the ship starts moving towards us and i se guns begining to be armed"they are preparing to atack!load the cannons!"

lizzy helped arm one of the cannons except she put one of her home made bombs in there that shtters killing more people when it blows up.

Rin shook her head and said "No need, I can take care of the ship with my canon.". Rin took her canon off of her back and shot the ship, it sank and it only took one fire. "All done."

"nice shootin"