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Old 07-17-2011, 06:45 PM

I'll give you a poem with a riddle inside, figure out the riddle and make that a poem! ;) Tricky but fun!

I'm born again, just fresh out of the womb
And I am slowly dieing, for my time is near..
Don't be so sad my dear friend, you may not be fresh yet, but soon you will be reborn.
Hah, you say such things but at my age, at my time... that won't happen. You're innocent yet, wait until later!
Someone once told me: Ones that are born are the kind and golden ones, Yet as they age their love slowly withers...
Tell me dear friend, what is the meaning?
That is a secret for the ancient...

That's the end of it. And my challenge is set forth, the answer is written all over it.. just a small hint. ;) Have fun deciphering and have fun poetry writing!

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Old 07-19-2011, 09:27 AM

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hmm what about one about yourself :)

Inside your mind
I creep and crawl
Finding your secrets
Helping fix your faults
My voice sooths you
A we speak alone
You tell me everything
Without fear of rebuke
I am your confidant
Litening to your ails
I am your doctor
Of mind and heart


I hope this one's good enough for you Miss_Muffinz13x:

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#53
Old 07-26-2011, 03:47 AM

What about hm.....
Maybe one about a person with a twisted mind, loves a monster without a head, and loves 'humans' and putting them in devious situations :D?
I just wanna see what you come up with ^^

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Old 07-28-2011, 02:13 PM

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What about hm.....
Maybe one about a person with a twisted mind, loves a monster without a head, and loves 'humans' and putting them in devious situations :D?
I just wanna see what you come up with ^^

The voices speak to me
telling me of my beloved
No eyes to see me
No lips to kiss me
No neck to kiss
It tells of our geart love
and how it will last forever
Our hearts as one
Our lusts of truth
Our everything
The mortals run about us
not knowing of our plans
To touch forbidden flesh
To give into passion
To feel slick bodies
Let them run from we lovers
and let them have no solace
Give them one last breath
Give them one last word
Give them peace at last


Ugh, I hate loseing track of this thread! There you are DaisyKeehl: what cha think?

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Old 07-28-2011, 06:00 PM

Its pretty good! :) Your writting is reeaallyyy interesting

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#56
Old 08-15-2011, 10:41 AM

Well, any more challengers? DO I need to post more random Poetry here?

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Old 08-15-2011, 01:33 PM

One night while I was living in Florida I was walking around just for the hell of it. Then I turned over to my left and I stared upon a beautiful blue moon that was a large as a house just before me. Now the scenery was an open field surrounded by a stream and a bunch of palm trees. The part that tops it off is the birds that settle in the area. There actually was a pelican there that early night. Not long after that.... somewhere in my mind a month within? I ended up seeing a gorgeous red moon right after in the same place.
Think you can write something that can make me feel the same beautiful scenery?

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#58
Old 08-17-2011, 03:46 PM

Its been two days mister and you have no one else your working on lawl
I win
-runs away-

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#59
Old 08-22-2011, 08:48 PM

how about this.... Giggle-snort

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Old 08-23-2011, 04:43 PM

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how about this.... Giggle-snort

Not quite a giggle
not quite a snort
she covers her mouth
to hide her sport
Played with a guy
just across the hall
as on a banana peel
he did slip and fall
A form of stifled laughter
of desperately hidden mirth
refraining from exposing
humor for all it's worth

Here you are Nettchen11: Enjoy!

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#61
Old 08-24-2011, 03:19 AM

I love you soooooooo much!!!!!!

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Old 08-24-2011, 07:18 PM

hey! I'm back with the perfect idea!!!....hopefully...
Anyway, you should do one where this guy is in a band with his two twin brothers but they die in a car accident and hunts there brother every time he tries to play o.o yes, this is my idea for a poem lol

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Old 08-25-2011, 03:20 AM

Here's a silly one:
Write a poem about a man who drove his car backwards up a tree while eating spaghetti!
;D

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Old 08-31-2011, 12:18 AM

I GOT A SLIGHTLY TWISTED ONE!

squirrels eating my eyes!

>:3 i like poetry myself but all mine turn out dark i couldnt do this cuz i cant write happy lolz i wish i could write like you

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Old 09-11-2011, 10:29 PM

hello fellow poet! here's one for you: write a poem while listening to 'at anchor' by port blue

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Old 09-13-2011, 01:27 PM

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hey! I'm back with the perfect idea!!!....hopefully...
Anyway, you should do one where this guy is in a band with his two twin brothers but they die in a car accident and hunts there brother every time he tries to play o.o yes, this is my idea for a poem lol
We were together for such a long time
But now I find I'm all alone
Thoughts of our years together haunt me
Everytime I pick up my sticks to play
My brothers dear
one just like the other
Why did you leave me
To tell our mother
Why couldn't you stay
and throw back another
Give me this night
to play one last time
your spirits around me
as I pay for my crimes
Letting you leave me
though I knew you unfit
to drive yourselves home
I should have stopped it
I feel you here now
your souls float around me
as I play one last time
before returning to thee
Give me a sign
Let me return
A band once again
Or let my soul burn


AshbornFox: There you go! Sorry it took so long!

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Here's a silly one:
Write a poem about a man who drove his car backwards up a tree while eating spaghetti!
;D


Every time I suck them up
I find meyself somewhere stuck
Like squirming worms
I slurp them inside
Gulping them down
as I go for a ride
But what is the fun
in the same old direction?
I'll take to it different this time
How about some reverse?
My focus returns to my sketty
and I fail to see
the oncoming traffic
and of coarse the tree
So here I sit
Sucking up this fine meal
once again stuck
'Cause how noodles make me feel.


I hope that works for you fiana7895: !

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I GOT A SLIGHTLY TWISTED ONE!

squirrels eating my eyes!

>:3 i like poetry myself but all mine turn out dark i couldnt do this cuz i cant write happy lolz i wish i could write like you


I look below
and see me there
No longer moving
I no longer care
Lifeless and cold
my body will rot
My body is ther
but I am not
Rats will nest in my stomach
and flies in my hair
Squirrels will eat my eyes
and I guess that is fair
Let them do what they like
with that abandoned flesh
For I go to a better place
a place where air is fresh
This is my final good-bye
but I know that no one will cry
For I died so long ago
the joy I have now
they must surly know
Up or down
it matters not to me
for now this time
I am finally free



Saphire4260: I made this one happy for you. At least it is to me. I hope you like it! Sorry for the late response!

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hello fellow poet! here's one for you: write a poem while listening to 'at anchor' by port blue


I move along
through my life
My soul's rythem
echoed in my steps
The people around me
Paying me no mind
As my soul takes wing
For the very first time
Like the flutter of a dove
A light chirp in it's beat
I find myself willing
To greet another day
The toils try and bring me down
But I must fly to this soulful sound
All those around me
They dream as I do
But we are mute to one another
We all live our own dreams
So as I move along
I listen to the song
From deep within
and it help me go
From moment to moment
Fufuling my soul



fade_to_grey: Just got my internet up and running smoothly, so sorry for the delay. I hope you like it! It's a nice song, and it really held me there. thanks for the challenge!


I hope to see more coming, now that I have the ability to respond once again!

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Old 09-13-2011, 03:32 PM

thanks!!!! -squeeel- i loved it lol :)

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Old 09-13-2011, 03:34 PM

SO glad you like it. Any more challenges?

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Old 09-14-2011, 12:28 AM

It was great! It seemed happy to me, thank you!

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Old 09-15-2011, 02:49 AM

LOVED IT! ;D

How about.. evil sweaters attacking something.

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Old 09-16-2011, 09:54 PM

What about some one who is insane wants to get a red rose for someone he loves but when he gets to a small flower thing to get the rose they only have white roses so he kills the shop person so he can dip the rose in the mans blood in order to get his red rose

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Old 09-17-2011, 11:20 PM

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LOVED IT! ;D

How about.. evil sweaters attacking something.

There they run
There they flee
Here they go on
Here they come to me
WIthout a hope
Without a plea
Within the comfort
Within the city
I attack them
I set them free
I am the killer sweater
I am coming for thee

fiana7895: There you go, hope you like it!

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What about some one who is insane wants to get a red rose for someone he loves but when he gets to a small flower thing to get the rose they only have white roses so he kills the shop person so he can dip the rose in the mans blood in order to get his red rose


Free from the chains that bound him
The man sets out to prove his love
He follows his nose to the place
The place he has been dreaming of
The flower's sweet scent give rise to pain
The pain that had caused him to go insain
His eye seek out the rose so red
Finding it not, he kills the vendor dead
Picking up a rose of white
He dips it in the spreading pool
Of crimson blood pouring into the night
To make the rose match his heart
To his love he will bring the flower
And in that moment will be her final hour



Saphire4260: I know the rhyming seems a little wonkey, but with the right beat, you'll get it. Hope you like it!

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Old 09-18-2011, 03:52 AM

That was aweaome! I loved it, i actually really liked how the rymeing is! Thank you so much i loved it

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Old 09-18-2011, 04:24 AM

Saphire4260: Glad you liked it. It was fun to write.

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Old 11-17-2011, 10:05 PM

HEY I HAVE ONE!!!!! do it on how this quote makes you feel or think of or whatever,
Quote:
“I don't like ass kissers, flag wavers or team players. I like people who buck the system. Individualists. I often warn people: "Somewhere along the way, someone is going to tell you, 'There is no "I" in team.' What you should tell them is, 'Maybe not. But there is an "I" in independence, individuality and integrity.'" Avoid teams at all cost. Keep your circle small. Never join a group that has a name. If they say, "We're the So-and-Sos," take a walk. And if, somehow, you must join, if it's unavoidable, such as a union or a trade association, go ahead and join. But don't participate; it will be your death. And if they tell you you're not a team player, congratulate them on being observant.”
― George Carlin
:3 i love that quote and wanna see what you can do with it if you can do anything with it.... idk its fine if you want to ignore this one

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