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Old 06-09-2010, 03:07 PM

some recent I have made. Sorry in advance for blurry image. I took them with my iPhone ><
Please give me critique regarding body proportions and other things that would enhance my ability :D

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Old 06-09-2010, 03:19 PM

*kawaii! I think both pict are just cool n awesome! =3


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Old 06-09-2010, 03:24 PM

thanks :D
but it feels to me the proportion for those legs in first image seem wrong whilst in the second image, the breast proportion as well as the body seem not right? D: or is it just me? D:

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Old 06-09-2010, 10:45 PM

the anckle on the first pic on the leq hiqh is super skinny, but its really cute. ii like em =]

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Old 06-11-2010, 06:39 PM

your good im horrible at drawing and i like the second one u drew was really good great work!

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Old 06-13-2010, 05:07 PM

I think the first drawing is more beutifull than the second but,..
both are awesome!!;)
Keep up the neat work!!=3

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Old 06-18-2010, 01:02 AM

thanks all! :heart:

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Old 06-24-2010, 12:26 AM

From what I can see of the first one, the length of the legs might be a bit too long, and/or a tad too thin. From what I've gathered, the thigh portion of the legs is equal to, if not a bit longer than the calf part. Otherwise they both look pretty good. :)

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Old 07-09-2010, 01:08 AM

looks great!

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Old 07-09-2010, 04:16 AM

No match for mine! >_< You have so much detail, and your lines are so fine... Here's mine, If you don't mind me posting it here.


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Damn... Plus you have real sex appeal in yours!!

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Old 07-09-2010, 01:50 PM

I don't mind :D would you like me to provide you some critique? Thanks for the appraisal btW. As for shading, I stared at folded clothe to figure out which area to shade

 


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