08-13-2007, 05:59 PM
Like Sadistix said, It's pretty good for a beginning.
@Kippy: How long you've been drawing doesn't matter, it's how well you can draw. She may have been trying out a different style, but unless that style involves having long necks and square broad shoulders, it's still a beginners piece. Being a beginner isn't a bad thing. For a beginner, the piece looks really good.
My critiques:
The next seems too long. If you look at your own neck, or look at someone else's neck, you'll see about how long it should be. I'd say a neck should be half a head long or so.
Also, the shoulders are wide and square. Shoulders start to slope downward at the neck, and are about half a head wide. Where you drew the sides would be a good place for the shoulders to end.
Other than that you seem to have a pretty good understanding of perspective and anatomy :3 Keep practicing.
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