Together


In this time and place together,

We sit and cuddle saying forever.

Forever, for always, until our end,

We think about how our hearts mend.

I am your Venus you are my Mars,

We both love to sit back and watch the stars.


In this time and place together,

We lay asleep thinking forever.

I am yours, and you are mine.

Are Love is, and always will be Devine.

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Feeling


I have this feeling,

This emotion inside.

This emotion is healing,

And evermore growing.

It’s beautiful, it’s gentle,

It’s something new to me.


What is this feeling,

This emotion inside?

It drives me to insanity,

Delusion, frustration,

Lust.


I feel as if I do not have it,

I might die.

I must have it to be alive.


I have this feeling,

This emotion inside.

This emotion is eradicating,

And evermore growing.

It’s beautiful, it’s gentle,

It’s something new to me.

And someday it’ll make me,

No longer be.

I think they're both pretty cute. Though I will admit I like the second one better.
The first one was a little cliché, but I might just think that because it rhymed. The first was a little shiny and round, while the second one seems raw to me and I like that. Good job on both though. They’re both a heck of a lot better than that I could do. ^-^

- Sora