Thanks a bunch xuv. I was going for a choking collar, but I can see how it might look a bit stabbity. I will see what I can do about the shading (as mentioned above after Maria's comment) and fixing the puffiness of the sleeves so that they match. Thanks for the feedback, dear. I appreciate it. You've given me much to consider and toy with. <3

Marie, where did your jacket come from?
It's got 2 colors in it? I don't think I've seen that before.

Seri, I like the sleeve gem also!

(I'm kinda liking the poking collar too... lol...

Seeeri<3
you're pixels are so good.

Two voted for the sleeve gem! Methinks that means it stays, since we seem to have no nay-sayers appearing. o.o

Aww, danke, Clock. Seri's been practicing. She's not quite where she wants to be just yet, but she's working on getting there and she's like to think that she's come along way.

@Maria & xuv - slowly working your feedback in. I've softened up the lines a bunch and fixed the sleeves.



Ugh, it's having an under the corset shading issue on the left side now.
Will fix later. >.<

I love love love the concept behind your shirt! :DD
The only thing I can think for you to change is the bottom frills that lay flat on her hips. I think you should bring them out ever-so-slightly.

Seridano; wow i LIKE that shirt..

Lol, you should get your shape right before shading the lines.
Because, you would have to reshade the lines again if you change the shape.

@Demo - I see what you mean. I'll see what I can do about those.

@thanks, star

@xuv - But I already changed the shape. o.O

You haven't changed the one demomo mentioned.
That frill at the hem.
and that one is the one complicated ass... I mean frill. <3

xD Oh, I thought you were still referring to the sleeves. My bad. Yeah, I'm going to wait a bid before tackling those frilly lil bizntches.

Oh sorry, I might have miss that you want to put it at the back. XD
Because it is shape. the WHOLE section of shape, I thought you meant. XD

The Wip2 shirt, with the belt, is looking good so far.

I like it!

nice pixels

I know this is in finished pixels... but shouldn't Andraziel's Wrap on the guy be on his shoulder as well...

Don't kill me! *covers head* It is amazing and all, but it looks a little odd on the guy.

Oops! >.< You're right, I should totally fix that. Dunno how I didn't notice that.
/feels like an idiot

hope we get that shirt in TEAL with turrquoise!

I could do a recolor of it for you, hummy. I think it'd look lovely in those colors.

Also, did a bit of work on the wrap, it's still not quite where I want it, but the male shoulder shape is starting to work out a bit better. Should be finished wit it in a bit. The same goes for the WIP2 shirt. I've worked a bit with the frills on the bottom. They no longer lay awkwardly flat. I took a gander at some actual shirts with frilly hems and noticed that they aren't quite equal and tend to shift and bunch around the bottom and tried to replicate that here, which was a bit difficult for Seri, because she really likes orderly, equidistant things. ^.^;

I think I figured out what was bothering me with this shirt.

The collar is not centered with the boobs and the avvie's chin. It's too far right.

Erm..here...

I was messing with it trying to figure out what was bothering me XD (was also playing with the shades sorry) The one on the left is what I was doing...the one of the right is yours - the red line is currently where it's lined up and the green line is really where it should be centered...*hopes I'm making sense*


Erm - sorry - I don't want to cause more work D:

*hopes I'm not coming off as mean*

It makes perfect sense, and is part of the reason why WIP2 is, in fact, still a wip rather than a finished design. Thanks for the head's up. I'd noticed it was a bit off, but couldn't quite put my finger one what was wrong (specifically), so this is a big help.

Oh yes - work in progresses are a work in progress D: I wanna see this shirt in stores so...trying to help :P It's coming along nicely :D I wish I could make such details stuff D:

Sad faces...why the sad faces? Did Seri come off as rude/mean again?
/kicks self

She really does appreciate the feedback/critiques/help (more than she can properly verbalize, apparently). ^.^;

Aaaanywho, I'm glad you like the shirt. I've had a lot of fun working on it thus far, and what you say about details isn't true at all. You're far better at details (and pixeling in general) than I am. I actually use what you, xuv, and demo do as guides, of a sort, to help improve my own pixeling.

Oh nonononono Seri wasn't mean - sad faces were because I wish I could pixel details like youuuu and that wip are wip and not finished XDDD

and lmao - I use you, demo, and xuvvie as guides XD Xuvvie is like my mentor XD

Xuv is such a sweetheart, and her critiques are uber insightful. Plus, her pixels are gorgeous.

Xuvvie pushes me to my limit and then my limit expands - I appreciate that :D Because that's how I get better :D

Aww I am flattered and feel even excited for being said 'sound' like a evil master!!
I always like those crazy master in manga/anime. Those that is both crazy and hot headed. XD

Seriri~ I didn't notice your newest update? O_O where?
I am itching to be evil again~
Lately, no one posted new updates for me to pester...*feels lonely*