02-20-2010, 03:00 AM
The picture's okay, though you probably should have added a nudity warning. That being said, there are some anatomy issues to be addressed here. Like for example, the couple's arms have no shape or curve and the wrists and hands are way too small/thin. The girl's face is fine, but I feel there's something off about the boy. Actually, the boy in general is kinda off. I know the male anatomy can be tricky sometimes, but it's best to practice practice practice because otherwise you won't get any better. I do like their hair, I think it's very pretty, almost retro-like in it's style. What I mean like that is that this picture gives me the old-school anime vibes, which is not a bad thing. I like old-school anime artwork. Overall, it's not bad, but it could use improvement.
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