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Old 05-14-2014, 02:35 PM

I see your eyes,
The glow of your soul,
Your silent cries
Are something I behold

Your hand I hold,
The thoughts you portray,
Are of finest gold
Even with the games you play

I think about you,
When you are gone
Yes it's true
Maybe it's a little wrong

But I do,
Yes I do.

You hold on tight,
To your own opinions,
Whether or not they're right
There are no other options

I think I love you,
But I am not sure
Is it true?
Could it be you?

You refuse to listen to lies,
To the fake cries,
Tears are useless to you
Unless they are real and true

I am sorry to say
That it's you I think about every day
You may not know,
But I think I do

I think about you,
Everyday I do
I think I love you,
But you'll never love me too

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Old 05-19-2014, 09:36 PM

That was beautifully written. I like simple rhymes like this. It makes me think of those folks with guitars on street corners singing love ballads. They always make me feel so warm and happy.

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Old 05-20-2014, 05:51 PM

Thank you! I love that too, and like to try to convey the simple artist on the street corner vibe in my writing!

 


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