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Old 07-02-2010, 07:41 AM

These are the first paintings I've done in years. I don't have a ton of experience painting, so keep that in mind. These versions are censored, full size (un-censored) versions are click-able underneath.


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So...let me know what you guys think. (but please be gentle lol)

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Old 07-04-2010, 11:13 AM

Anyone have an opinion?

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Old 07-05-2010, 07:03 PM

You need to work on your proportions a bit methinks. This is a good start, but I'd look through an anatomy book. Its the arms that bother me but I do like how you painted them. Its different in a good way =)

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Old 07-08-2010, 03:52 AM

Very nice indeed! The arms and maybe even the legs could be shorter and proportion as well could be a bit better. Otherwise love the way you did it.

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Old 07-08-2010, 06:09 AM

I think the torso could stand to be a little longer, but it looks alright. :)

 


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