These are the first paintings I've done in years. I don't have a ton of experience painting, so keep that in mind. These versions are censored, full size (un-censored) versions are click-able underneath.
You need to work on your proportions a bit methinks. This is a good start, but I'd look through an anatomy book. Its the arms that bother me but I do like how you painted them. Its different in a good way =)