It got it's name for everything that happens in it. There are murders, muggings, and kidnappings. But a special force has come to the city to help it. And this group of detectives will help clean up Crime City. There are 4 detectives in it along with the computer genius and there is the forensic scientist. Also there is the person who looks at the dead bodies (forgot what it is called). Will this group be able to clean up crime city? We will see.

Rules:

Follow Menewsha rules and my rules
Pm me the the profiles
Use the skeleton provided
You can have romance just keep it Pg-13
Violence is ok of course just not out of character
Action must happen once a page other wise it would be boring.

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Name:
Age: Detectives must be 18 and over
Gender:
Bio:
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Name: Amanda
Age: 20
Gender: Female
Bio: Amanda was the first Detective in the group making her the leader. She is smart and knows how to crack a case. The cases she puts forth all she can in is those involving children and rape because it is so sad. She plans on making crime city clean.
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Originally Posted by happydeath

Name: Akio Dashi
Age: 21
Gender: Male
Bio: Akio is a detective that had joined the force a couple of years back, so he kind of a veteran but yet at the same time he was still partially new to the whole thing in a way. He had been in the business for about two to three years already. The problem was that ever since he had joined the force, from the beginning Akio was already blind but was able to use his other senses to see the other things around him. This was due to the fact that on the day he was born, Akio was already born blind anyway but not to mention was born with some kind of strange illness that he had to take medications for every couple of hours. He keeps the medication he needs in a small little rectangular box on his jacket at all times, so that when he needs it. He has it.
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Originally Posted by lydia1020

Name: Lydia
Age: 21
Gender: female
Bio: Lydia used to be a brilliant student, from the age of 5 when she first started kindergarten until the age of 17 when she finished high school (early). After that she began going to college, studying anatomy and preparing for med school. One day while she was home during winter for vacation her parents went out to get groceries. About an hour later she got a call that her parents had been in a fatal car crash with a drunk driver. At first she thought it was some kind of sick joke, one of her dad's buddies trying to screw with her head, so she went down to where the wreck was said to have happened and lo and behold there were her parent's mangled forms being pulled out of the car by a couple of paramedics. After that traumatic event she went into a deep state of depression, which worsened with every day. She dropped out of college and for weeks nobody had seen or heard from her, and during that time became a shut-in. Eventually she came out of her house and got a job, but she was never really the same. Now she spends most of her time working at home, but she's been having these ideas, these thoughts, which at any other point in her life would have been enough for her to send herself to the psychiatrist, but when you go insane you really don't realize it...
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Originally Posted by Wonderbar

Name: Silas Mikas

Age: 22

Gender: Male

Bio: Silas Mikas grew up in a rough foster home with 5 other kids. Once he was 18, he ran away and since then he's been spending his time on the streets. He spends his time doing mercenary work for a Greek gang of thugs. In his pocket he keeps a picture of his parents. He lost them at an early age. The only thing he has left of them is a photo that was taken before he born. He's proficient with a baseball bat.

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Amanda Sat in her office looking over the case that they had just finished. It still sickened her that that man had been doing that to those women, but he was behind bars now.

((hello pretties! I guess I shall be the first criminal in this city of crime. AHAHAHA!))

Lydia walked into the man's house, a barely restrained smile on her face. She'd found this man, her first 'prey' outside a bar where he was drunk with keys in hand. She managed to convince him to take a cab home, but only on the condition that she would 'escort' him there. Although disgusted by the man, she decided to go with him, if just to keep him from performing that horrible act which had caused her own parents their untimely demise. On the way to his home, the scene of the wreck that had killed her parents played over and over in her head, and she couldn't get her mind off how this man was willing to put others lives in jeopardy.
"Show me a gud time, honeey," the man slurred in his drunken state. "It'll be fun fo' bot o' us"
She chuckled as she thought to himself I'll show you a good time alright
"Just go to the bedroom, I'll be there in a minute" she said instead, her smile growing wide, she couldn't contain her excitement anymore, she was going to put an end to someone she felt was nothing more than a piece of scum on the underside of society. The man stumbled into the bedroom and collapsed onto the bed, rolling over onto his back.
"Hurry up!" he yelled.
She walked into the bedroom and sat on top of his stomach with a huge smile on her face. The man began smiling too, but he didn't know about the paring knife she'd taken from his kitchen and had concealed under her sleeve. She leaned towards his face as if she were going to make out with him, but instead took the knife and stabbed behind his ear, hitting the artery there. Blood sprayed from his head as he tried to push her off of him, but he quickly weakened due to shock and loss of blood. She stayed on top of him as he weakly swatted at her and watch as the blood slowly drained from his body, and the life drained from his eyes. She pulled the knife out of the dead man's form and walked out, gone as quickly as she'd come.

Amanda picked up the phone. It was about a man who was murdered in his house. She told them she was on her way. She walked outside and got in her vehicle and rode to the crime scene. The police officer there let her in. "talk to me" she said walking in the house. "well the man was found by his neighbor about 30 minutes ago. He was stabbed in the head behind the ear in the artery and basically his blood drained. "i am gonna look at the body" amanda said and walked in the room and began examining the body.

Lydia walked into her apartment and set her keys down on the table, she still had the bloody knife in her pocket. She pulled out the knife and looked at it, and thoughts began swirling in her head.

I... I killed somebody
He was scum, reckless irresponsible scum
but, he was still a person
No! He was not! He was a drunkard! A worthless piece of trash!
HE WAS HUMAN!
No, he was a drunk, and an irresponsible one at that. Just like the one that killed our parents.
Yes, you're right.

She then began to take pride in what she'd done, knowing that it was, at least to her, a good thing that this man had perished by her hand and her blade.

But I shouldn't tell anyone else about this.
No, they would not understand, they would not see this the same way we do.
There are more of them, more pieces of scum like him.
Yes, let us rid the world of his kind. We shall purge the earth of the wicked

With that thought she went into her closet and grabbed an old purse, putting 'supplies' in it for the rest of the night and walked out her door.

Soon, soon the world will be free of these evil creatures.
Yes, and we shall make it that way.
Soon the world shall be pure

(disturbing)

Amanda was still looking at the body and the blood soaked bed. Then the police officer came in again. "one of the knifes is missing so that tells you the killer was invited in" he said. "yes but who would do this. probably female" amanda siad.

((O_O Not sure where to come in ^^'' sooo I'll go with something pulled out of a hat. XD))

Akio at this point was already investigating a different crime at another crime scene as it had seemed to be a female laying under the bleachers of a gym inside a high school. The girl's body was covered in blood from head to toe although it seemed that her legs were crushed by something extremely heavy. There were two other officers walking around the gym to see if they could find any clue for who would've done this or possibility with what did the person use to do this to the poor girl. Slipping on some latex gloves, Akio tried to pick up one of the legs only to figure out that they were barely even able to be picked up at all. The legs felt like wet noodles as it simply slid through his fingers and right back onto the floor. "hmm...well, it couldn't have been people stomping on it.." he stated to himself since he couldn't feel any boot or shoe marks on her legs and stomping on them with bare feet simply wouldn't have done this much damage.

Suddenly right before he was about to call out to the other officers, he gave a quick gasp as his eyes widened right behind his bandaged eyes. Looking away from the dead body he began coughing and gasping for breath as he slowly reached for the small container on his jacket and quickly took one of the pills that he had to take every so often. Slowly his own breathing stabilized itself as he panted heavily only for another moment. This strange illness of his was still confusing to him and doctors since no one really knew if this was due to his blindness ever since he was born; or this was something different. Standing back up to his own feet, he stepped out from under the bleachers and looked around the gym for the officers until he found them. "Find anything useful?" he asked one of the officers as they simply both shook their heads; both of these men were twins so whenever one went anywhere, the other seemed to follow along anyway.

Giving a little annoyed sigh, Akio just scratched the back of his head and looked right around the gym. Even though he may had been blind, he could still have a small feeling what the room looked like thanks to him having to train his other senses to the point that they were completely mastered. "Maybe the scientists can get more information off of the body. Send a medical crew down here to get the body back to HQ. Make sure to tell them to be careful..we can't have that thing getting fingerprints of someone we don't need. Got it?" Akio stated as they both nodded once more in agreement before Akio began to leave the gym to head back to Headquarters.

Amanda decided to take the body back to the lab. She got paramedics to bring him and when she got to the lab she looked him over again. She noticed light reflecting off of a piece of hair. She picked it up and put it in a small bag. She then kept looking. She picked up her cell why she was looking and dialed agent Dashi's number waiting for him to pick up.

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( :cry: my posts suck compared to you guys)

((The only reason that post of myne was long was because it was my intro lol ^^'' didn't know what to put so I made up my own little story. xDD so dun feel bad :3))

While Akio was walking back toward headquarters, he heard how the ambulances were sirening right passed him to get toward the high school he had just left so that they could take the girl's dead body back to headquarters. All of a sudden however, while he was walking down the street his eyes widened right up from through the bandages when he heard his phone vibrate in his pocket. Reaching into his pocket and pulling out his phone; flipping it right open and placing it toward his ear to wonder who it was. "Hello?" he asked waiting for an answer from whoever was on the other end.

"hey Akio It's Amanda. how are things with you. Any new cases?" she asked.

When Akio had heard that it was Amanda, he just continued walking his way back to headquarters as he kept one of his hands in his pocket; while the other hand was still holding onto the phone at his ear speaking with her. "I just got a new case, some teenage girl was found under the bleachers of the North High School gym, it looked as though her legs just got crushed by something insanely heavy. I dont know what it could've been; but I sent her body to Headquarters for it to be checked out. What about you?"

"i have a man here who had a knife stabbed in his artery behind his ear. he bled to death" she said.

"A man stabbed in the ear..with a knife?...thats a new one." Akio simply whispered to himself shaking his head lightly as he continued to make his way until he finally reached the front entrance to headquarters. Although instead of going inside to deal with the investigations; he simply sat on the sidewalk while leaning his back against the building where headquarters was and continued to speak on the phone for a moment. "Do you have any leads to who would've done such a thing?" he asked placing his chin right onto the palm of his right hand as he rested the elbow on his knee. Akio didn't really even have a lead on who could've killed the girl from under the bleachers either; not until at least he had gotten some solid information on who the girl was; what she looked like so that he could ask around the high school to see who knew her and to see if anyone knew why anyone would want to kill the young girl.

"i found a piece of hair on his clothing and i am having it analyzed right now" she told him.

Lydia walked through the parking lot, her handbag full of 'supplies' slung across her shoulder. As she scanned the lot for another 'target' her mind began to wander back towards the man she had killed earlier.
We were sloppy, careless!
They're going to catch us!
HA! We won't let them, they have no reason to suspect us.
We didn't know him.
Never met him
We didn't know anyone who did.
Not a one
The only one who saw us together was the taxi driver.
THE DRIVER! We must get rid of the driver! He saw us, he knew we were with him!
Then, what... what will we do?
We already know what must be done, don't we?
Uh, um...
He can ruin us! End our plans!
But he's not like the beast we killed! He's human, a good human being!
We shall see about that.
Wha... what do you mean?
We shall need the receipt we got from him earlier.

Lydia then dug through her purse, until she came to her wallet, then she pulled out a receipt (though it looked more like a third of a printed piece of plain white paper)

Good! It has the cab number on it, and his name!
But, what are we to do with him?
We shall dispose of him, of course
but...
But Nothing! He can stop us from ridding the world of these talking beasts! He must be eliminated as well!
I... We understand.

She then pulled out her cell phone and called for a cab, specifically requesting the same driver from earlier that night. About half an hour later the cab showed up and she got in, her bag of 'supplies' with her.

Silas walked the streets with his backpack over his shoulder. He had heard some whispers in the dark that someone was killed on the Greek Gang's turf earlier that night. He shrugged it off as just a rumor or perhaps his people getting too caught up. He let out a long sigh as he dragged his baseball bat behind him. There was a job he was sent to do. Some sleazy slime ball had to pay for his deeds. He didn't pay his dues and worse of all insulted the crime leader. Silas was the man for the job it seemed.

As he walked, he started to get nervous. Police were high in the area. He turned his head and noticed a cab at a red light. Instead the car was a girl. He stared at her. He wasn't sure why but his attention was glued to her.

The cab pulled into an empty lot and the driver said, "Are you sure this is the right place? There's nothing here but dirt, weeds, and an empty shed"
"I know," Lydia said, "But it's where I wanted to go"
She then got out of the cab and started walking off, when the driver began shouting. "This isn't a free service, you know, I need my payment."
"Then come get it!" She yelled as she ran into the empty shed. The driver, thinking he was going to make her pay for her ride, got out of his cab and followed her into the small shed, but a moment later everything went dark. As lydia set down the 2x4 she'd just clubbed the man with, her mind began racing

Lets.. lets just do this quickly
But we needs to know what he knows!
He's not like our other targets, he's just a working man.
But he could stop us! Have us thrown in prison!
He's innocent! We don't need to make him suffer!
He wont suffer! Not as long as he cooperates!
What if he doesn't, what then?
Then we end it quickly
No, we need to end it now
Fine, see what happens to us!

Lydia then bent over the man and pulled the keys out of his pocket, deciding that she was going to need the car as a way of destroying the evidence. She then pulled a long knife out of her bag, running it through the man's armpits, severing many vital veins, arteries, and nerves. The man died quickly, and as peacefully as a murder can be, the blood quickly draining from his body and pooling on the floor around him. Lydia then went to the cab, turned it on, and ran it into the shed, destroying most of the shed in the process.

Goodbye. I wish that you had been able to live. but you would've impeded our plans, and we cannot have that.

She opened the gas tank, stuck a rag from her bag in, and lit it, walking away before the car became an inferno.

Silas followed the cab on a scooter he hot wired. He witnessed everything from behind one of the bushes. His eyes were wide as he witnessed her murder this man. All he wanted was his money. Then again, who was Silas to judge. He had done things worse than this when the Greeks demanded it. The Russians were in on it as well. With a gulp, Silas ran from the inferno. Everything was racing. His head pounding. If the Greeks found out, they wouldn't be happy. This was their turf and someone was interfering.

He did the one thing he would later regret and he knew it. Without paying attention, he made himself visible to this murderess.

As Lydia walked away, she saw a man running from behind a pair of bushes, and most importantly, it seemed to her that the man had seen her, if not kill the driver, then at least set the car ablaze
Shit! Another witness!
She then took off after the witness letting her shoes fly off in the process. She was very quick and agile, partially due to the fact that she was skinny and tall, but also partially due to the fact that while she was in high school her parents had pushed her into running track, so she would have 'more than just good grades' to help her get into college. Out of the corner of her eye she saw the glint of metal, and quickly recognized it as one of the gas scooters that get about 70 miles to the gallon.
that must be how he got here!
She ran over to it and hopped on, barreling towards the running man.

Damn it, he thought to himself. She's after me. If they find out, damn it! Running as fast he could Silas ran into one of the back alleys of the city. Traffic wasn't that heavy that night but he was hoping that it would be heavy enough to keep her from catching up to him. He was almost certain this wasn't the type of girl to work with him.

This got him thinking. She did kill that man, she was good, perhaps she could be of use to him. Silas jumped on top of the Chinese restaurant dumpster and waited for her to show up. Once she did, he would get ready to at least attempt to slow her down. He obviously wasn't thinking straight. Something was ticking in the back of his head. It was them. They knew he was up to it. What if they had the same mark??

((would it be alright if my character kidnapped yours?))

Lydia saw the man go into the alley and thought of the trick she had played on the cab driver.
he could be trying to trick us!
She pointed the scooter at the alley, put it in full gear, and jumped off just before it went into the alley, stumbling a little bit as she did so.

Being told that Amanda had found a strand of hair that she was analyzing right at this very moment to figure out who it belonged to. Akio just gave a little nod and stood back up to his own feet, it wasn't exactly sure how long it would've taken the scientists to figure out the description of what the female who had her legs completely crushed really looked like and who she was. So while he had that time, it was probably going to be a good idea to at least patrol the area to see if he could find anything useful in case someone might've been grieving over a dead friend and that possible dead friend could be the girl or possibility someone that knew the male Amanda was talking about so that he could get some information to just help her case. "Alright. Tell me if you need any help with--" he immediately stopped in the middle of his sentence when the scent of smoke caught onto him along with the sight of smoke clouding up in one area of the city. "Theres a fire going on near the eastern part of the city. Send the fire department over there. I'm going to check it out to see if I can figure out whats going on." he stated, hanging up the phone right after; than beginning to make his way toward that same direction of where the flames were going off.

(well. you guys move fast but not to fast. that is good)

"you got it" she said then signaled the fire department and she went outside and got in her car and drove towards the fire.

((She could try to kidnap him if she likes. I was thinking of having him talk to her.. but since she's not stable, it makes sense.))

Silas jumped down in front of the scooter and grabbed it by the handle bars. "Hang on," he shouted, "I just want to talk to you. Can you hear me out? We aren't that different, you and I. I've.. I've done what you have done."

Lydia heard what the man had said, and stopped for a minute
he's done what we've done?
It could be a trap!
But what has he done?
Don't listen to him!
He could help us
NO! He'd be nothing more than a liability!
Let's hear him out.
FINE! But we must be cautious!
Lydia went into her bag and grabbed a gun, aiming it at the man as she slowly stepped into the alley. The gun was only meant for special situations, and she'd originally bought it when she moved into the city so that she could protect herself if somebody tried anything, this city did have a reputation, you know.
"Speak!" She ordered him