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Old 10-27-2009, 05:15 AM

And so round one of me vs. attempts at drabble. Okay, round three hundred and something, but 'tis my first documented one. So ha. Anyhow, I want to get some writing done without worrying too much about quality while developing characters, and found...this. <3

Please refrain from posting your own drabbles, but critiques and comments are loved. Much, much, much loved. So loved in fact that I might give you some avvie art since I'm in much need of drawing practice.

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Introduction Post
100 Themes: Eagle Court Index
It's All About the Luck (A 7-7-07 Special) Index
10 Vacation Themes Index
10 Symptoms Index
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Old 10-27-2009, 05:20 AM

100 Themes: Eagle's Court
Taken from Seito.
[link here]


1. Eagle
2. boring
3. leis
4. distraction
5. parents
6. raspberry mocha latte
7. centerpiece
8. patriotic
9. camera
10. air conditioning
11. program
12. desperations
13. halfway done!
14. can’t see
15. speech
16. award
17. sleepy zzzz
18. wired
19. flag
20. hungry
21. fire
22. inexplicable spill
23. shovel
24. sand castle
25. red white blue
26. elephant
27. stars
28. exit sign
29. moogle hat
30. tick tock goes the clock
31. not listening
32. uncomfortable formal attire
33. cramped seating
34. fluorescent vs those yellow lightbulbs
35. flash
36. under the table
37. almost there
38. fixed!
39. metal
40. squishy carpet
41. thirsty
42. giant bag of everything
43. yawn
44. don’t where we are
45. funny
46. disguised stain
47. penguin
48. silver string
49. buy one get one free
50. about to turn eighteen
51. memories
52. fang
53. running out of room
54. But it’s okay
55. Lucky 777
56. White… well dirty white walls
57. Taking forever
58. Turning the page
59. New and blank… well not anymore
60. The extra concentrated part at the bottom of the drink
61. Spill
62. Dropping something during a moment of silence
63. “Clatter!”
64. Just a little tiger
65. Mom
66. Big brother
67. Dad
68. Arguing
69. Hello
70. too loooong TT.TT
71. Clap
72. The indoor window
73. Ran out of film
74. I’m not wearing my shoes!
75. Me too!
76. meep
77. That’s okay
78. Don’t we have that one?
79. Dunno
80. oh well
81. nod
82. not pristine tablecloth
83. fooooooooood
84. traveler on the long road
85. finished!
86. unfortunately not
87. last word
88. squish!
89. that looked familiar
90. hurry up!
91. final stretch!
92. still steady
93. man they take forever
94. indeed
95. glare
96. crick in neck
97. at last!
98. won’t go away
99. finally!
100. I want a gobstopper. Well not really.

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Old 10-27-2009, 05:28 AM

It's All About the Luck (A 7-7-07 Special)
Taken from Seito.
[link here]


1. Penny
2. Dice
3. Horseshoe
4. Rabbit Foot
5. Clover
6. Four leaf Clover
7. I have an unhealthy addiction
8. Lady Luck sure is fickle, eh?
9. Shooting Star
10. Wishes guarantee nothing
11. Gamble
12. Roulette
13. 777

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Old 10-27-2009, 05:33 AM

10 Vacation Themes
Taken from Seito.
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1. Beach
2. Hotel/Motel/Inn
3. Rental Car/Horse/Carriage/Ship/etc
4. No Internet Access/No Technology Access
5. Luggage
6. Lost Traveler Check/Credit Card/Debit Card/Money
7. Road Trip
8. Airplane Ride/Car Ride/Ship Ride
9. Waking Up Early
10. Going Home/Last Day

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Old 10-27-2009, 05:40 AM

10 Symptoms
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1. Chicken Noodle Soup
2. Sleep
3. Fever
4. Tissue
5. Grandma's Secret Recipe
6. Sore
7. Miserable
8. Stuck in Bed/ in the house
9. Medicine
10. Sick

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Old 10-27-2009, 07:51 AM

10 Symptoms
8. Stuck in Bed/ in the House
Characters: Meeki, Gaurav, Orlaith
Purpose: Develop the relationships better.


The changeling girl appraised the room, the color of her irises twitching betweencolors, amber and coral, safari-yellow and blazing-white, as she did so. Cherry red when they settled on a bouquet by Meeki's bedside, where his presence all but permeated the individual molecules of air.

"Something wrong, Orlaith?" Her 'other self' had a lilt to her voice, despite her running fever.

"The flowers are plastic." Orlaith braced her hands against the wall, head purposely angled away from the offending objects. It did not matter that Meeki would not be able to scry her true reasons for ire behind that quip.

And as always, Orlaith's intuition was right. The bedridden girl coughed a bit, daintily, her lily-white wrist muffling the sound from her cutesy pink lips, then replied with a chiming laugh, "They last longer."

"They're fake."

"Is it really your way to harass poor little girls when they're horribly diseased?"

"Is it proper for the type of girl men raze kingdoms for to receive plastic flowers?" Orlaith could not keep the venom from her words, and from the subsequent silence, it was obvious Meeki had not been able to disregard that as some fevered illusion. She sighed, dropping her hands to her hips. "They're fake."

Meeki gave a timid smile, "I can't imagine Gaurav being a normal person and giving me normal roses."

At that, the changeling snapped.

"He used to give me real roses."

This time the silence lasted.

Author's Note: Ahh, these three, mangy leftovers of a book I wanted to write a few years back chock full of creative morass. I still <3 them though.
(I've also tweaked the original premises under which I created them. Maybe they'll become roleplay characters, or characters for a re-adaptation of that projected novel.)

Mwehh, it's so late at night that I can't see straight. I'll fix the grammar/finish the dang thing tomorrow.

 


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