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Whisper Invictus
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Old 03-20-2010, 04:07 PM

Welcome to the Neverending Poem.

I had an idea for the lit part of Mene to be more... fun? No, more actively involved in the community itself.

Rules (?):
More like "How this Works". I post my own poem to start out and then YOU add on to my poetry. Therefore we can have the Neverending Poem It's that simple. Please be creative and leave your own post open and try to make sense (but don't hold back at the same time ;)) Also, if you have already posted once, you can come back and add on later!


For anyone who posts, a small little "donation" will be given =3 Thanks for being creatively inspired!

(oh, and if you want to say something separate from the poem you add, or if you just want to say something... post in parentheses like this!)


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Start of Poem:

Rushing water.
Is it raining?
No the sky is clear,
The night is quiet.
But inside
Chaos burns like fire.

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Old 03-20-2010, 06:54 PM


...Chaos burns like fire.

Reigned in.
I am a slave,
Not a Prince.
Reigned in.
Anger and pain
Scorches me.
Reigned in.


((like this? :)))

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#3
Old 03-21-2010, 03:46 AM

A spark ignites
Deep inside
The pain will cease
And love will thrive.
Born from chaos
Order forms
The pain is no more

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Old 03-21-2010, 04:13 AM

But love won't last
And pain will grow
Let pass the past
While futures flow.
And in these times
Though wide awake,
We'll close our eyes
For dreaming's sake...

((Cat's addition reminds me of Greek mythology. :>
I hope I didn't make my part sound too much like an ending ;-; Sorry whoever posts next xD))

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Old 03-21-2010, 05:35 PM

For dreams are vast
Portaying more than future and past
Let not these dreams show our pain
But show the love of which we gain...

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((i hope u guys dont mind but i wanna write this stuff down if its ok with you. i'll credit u guys with ur mene tags so if anyone sees it at least they'll have some idea who wrote it, but if any thing it'll probably stay posted up in my room. if u mind plz do tell me i wont write anything til i get a response ok? by the way ur guys r good^^))

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Old 03-21-2010, 07:24 PM

((Ehhee :) The first part that I started with is actually one of my mannnny works and one that I entered in a Poetry contest. But I don't mind as long as you don't profit too much from it ;) And to everyone, you can continue adding on even if you've already posted once! ^^ I'll put that in the first post...))

But love is corrupted,
Only full of lost hope.
The sun dies-
The soul blackens.
Only hate will prevail
In the end, no hope...

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Old 03-21-2010, 07:45 PM

No hope,
Which this world is hexed,
I can not live in
So i shall make towards the next

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((sry i love trying my hand at poetry so i'll be posting here a lot if its ok))

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#8
Old 03-21-2010, 08:07 PM

Here I am lost,
No home to find.
In reality
I am not accepted.
But imagination
Unites the soul.


((Heh. It's wonderful :hug: It may just be me and you for a while though =3))

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Old 03-21-2010, 09:07 PM

With souls as one
Lets have some fun
In our worlds
Of pure imagination

((well thx and i dont mind it being me and u :glomp: but it would b more interesting with other minds in addition))

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Old 03-21-2010, 10:27 PM

The trees will dance,
But eventually red flowers
Turn to blood.
And in our eyes
Die.
What of the world then?


((Interesting. I like this thread- it's very involving :)

Edit~ I put you in my signature, Whisper. I'd love to see a lot of people trying this.))

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Old 03-22-2010, 01:23 AM

((AAAAHHH! I typed a long part but my browser changed to a new page for some reason and now it's gone!! ;-; -sob-
Anyway, you can use my parts, Black, I don't mind~))


Perhaps it will vanish,
Perhaps it will die.
But if it shall go,
Then so shall I.
And in the end
We all shall be
United together,
In sweet tranquility.
You and I forever...

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Old 03-22-2010, 03:42 AM

But forever is not as it seems
For even eternity has an end
When all happiness begins to blend
And life's glory no longer gleams

((thx cerulean))

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Old 03-22-2010, 04:20 AM

Even if all ends
There's always something new
Something to arise from nothingness

((don't know if that makes any sense))

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Old 03-22-2010, 04:24 AM

For all hope isn't lost
There is a gleam of hope
To strive, to live
To love we shall see
No one knows

((i don't think it worries them too much as long.))

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Old 03-22-2010, 04:49 AM

So onward
To be free
I shall trot ahead
to see what lies ahead of me

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Old 03-22-2010, 05:34 AM

Ahead there is
A road
lined with the bodies of those who've pasted
a sky
lined with a beauty that is unimaginable

Whisper Invictus
is in your head.

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Old 03-22-2010, 04:18 PM

Only beauty is wrath,
Bring torment to all.
And those favored with pain
Will overcome.
The sun will not die,
but shine on forever.


((Great scot! Thanks to all who are posting! :hug:))

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Old 03-23-2010, 12:50 AM

And in it's light
Our true brilliance will show
And the beauty of nature
Shall surely overflow

narhar, I did a short one for once... still has lotsa words though ^^'

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Old 03-23-2010, 12:56 AM

Shall surely over come
The test of nature
We shall see
In this crazy world
who knows?
Maybe we will see

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#20
Old 03-23-2010, 04:04 AM

see the forest for the trees
or see the dog for it's fleas
either way you say
tomato is still tomato.

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Old 03-23-2010, 04:40 AM

Different is same,
But then whats sane?
A box is still brown,
The mysteries inside lost.
Age brings ignorance...


((Heheh. :hug: Thanks to all! *throws gold*))

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Old 03-23-2010, 07:05 AM

beauty through ignorance,
ignorance through faith.
a box is only as important as its contents
what good can come of believing blindly?
or sitting by idly?
or waiting for the rain to fall?
or phone to ring?
or the mail to come?
or a song to sing?

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Old 03-23-2010, 08:25 AM

or to dance along?
to follow the beat.
but what happens
when you fall off the path
do you die?
do you disappear?
Or do you simply
start a new path
to follow?
to lead?
Who knows,
it seems

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Old 03-24-2010, 03:33 AM

like a mystery.
But you have the key
We all have the key
To someone else's box.

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Old 03-24-2010, 03:37 AM

Someone else's box
Someone else's lock
to their soul
who shall know
who can tell
if we know what is up
and what is down
who is good
and who is evil
in this land we call
home
we shall never know

 


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